Talk:Cookie Run: Kingdom

Latest comment: 1 year ago by WannurSyafiqah74 in topic Suggestion: shortening article text?

Sources for expanding edit

I saw this new article listed at WT:VG and saw it was lacking in content; while there is content here, it's mainly all primary and in-unsiverse content. Here's some additional sources to create a development

Hope these help! Pinging Everybodyza2593, the article's top contributor. Panini!🥪 12:47, 30 November 2021 (UTC)Reply

Suggestion: shortening article text? edit

I'm not sure if it's okay to (with collaborative help) drastically modify a page like this. I wouldn't want an article on a story-heavy gacha game have copious amounts of text describing it and its stories. Plus, I could rewrite things to also bring up voice actors for the English dub. Like: character (voice actor)

I have considered this some month ago, but never felt like stating it until now. So, how does this sound? WannurSyafiqah74 (talk) 08:09, 1 September 2022 (UTC)Reply

I also think some sections need to be tweaked:
  • Gameplay - try to sum up the game in a shorter way
  • Features - remove unnecessary subsections.
  • Development - feels like a changelog, fix formatting.
WannurSyafiqah74 (talk) 08:21, 1 September 2022 (UTC)Reply