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Your contributed article, Dream Theater's eleventh studio album

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We already have an article on this @ A Dramatic Turn of Events. Thanks, Dlohcierekim 21:27, 8 June 2011 (UTC)

Commander Shepard he/she?

Good idea on discussing it so we can resolve it once and for all. Here it is. Gary King (talk · scripts) 23:44, 16 August 2011 (UTC)

A barnstar for you!

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	For all your great work at Mass Effect 3. You've given that article far more attention than anyone else. Keep it up! Swarm 17:54, 3 October 2011 (UTC)

Storm Corrosion and sources

I suppose it'd be easier to write on your talk page than through edit summaries. What I was getting at, is that Youtube videos are to be avoided for a couple reasons.

1. It fails WP:SPS, there is no "editorial oversight" confirming that the information is true. I know, watching the video confirms it's really them, but what if the uploader was dishonest? What if they did some video editing, and altered some of the dialogue? Or removed a segment that altered the overall meaning or context. Because some random user did it, we can't know for sure. It's the same reason we don't use random messageboard quotes.
2. It fails WP:COPYVIO. Basically, it's not Youtube's video, it's Blabbermouth's video. They should receive credit, because it is their work. Youtube may not have the rights to such a video.

Both cases show why it'd be better to find the Blabbermouth original videos; Blabbermouth is a wikipedia reliable source, it's in its original form, and they have the legal rights to it. Sergecross73 msg me 18:22, 27 January 2012 (UTC)

Citations and date formats

Hi. I couldn't help but notice all the contributions you have made to Mass Effect 3, and these are much appreciated. However, there are a few issues (which may or may not be exclusive to you, I haven't checked the history thoroughly enough yet) with the manner in which you have cited your sources.

The first is date formatting: dates on Wikipedia may only be presented in a limited number of formats, which you have not adhered to in your citations. Taking "the 2nd of January 2011" as an example, it may only be formatted as either 2 January 2011 or January 2, 2011 in the prose (with the former only allowed in articles written in British/Irish/Australian etc English, and the latter only in North American English). In citations, those same formats may be used along with 2011-01-02 (i.e. yyyy-mm-dd, i.e. year-month-day); no other formatting/ordering is permitted since it can cause confusion (01/02/11, the format you have used, means January 2, 2011 in the US, but in most of the rest of the world means 1 February 2011). For more information, see WP:DATESNO.

It would also be helpful if you could use the {{cite web}} template, since it is easier to update (with archive urls etc) and ensures consistent formatting.

Thanks, Alphathon /'æɫfə.θɒn/ ^(talk) 03:30, 7 March 2012 (UTC)

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	For your continued improvement of flow and summarizing extraneous details in LeBron James. —Bagumba (talk) 16:34, 28 June 2012 (UTC)

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Orphaned non-free media (File:Shep and IM.jpg)

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Dream Theater

Just curious, how knowledgeable are you with regards to DT?BigJoeRockHead (talk) 16:50, 8 July 2012 (UTC)

I've been a die hard fan for seven years or so, so I'd say I'm pretty knowledgeable! Why? Did I write something stupid? :P--Ktmartell (talk) 18:59, 8 July 2012 (UTC)

No. I was attempting to tackle the Tours section; and all its related articles. I've found that there's really no continuity among them. Layout, formatting, some list set lists some don't etc... Was wondering if you had time, you'd take a look, offer some thoughts. Also, I made this recommendation here: Images_and_Tour. Btw, seeing them next week in Richmond,Va (2nd Meet & Greet) Nice!BigJoeRockHead (talk) 19:26, 8 July 2012 (UTC)

The entire Dream Theater article looks like a bit of a mess. I was going to start editing it later this week using the official DT biography for citations. Also, I envy you on going to the show! I live in NC so it's hard to see them.--Ktmartell (talk) 19:29, 8 July 2012 (UTC)

Yea, living in NC makes it hard; however, I've lived in NC since 1972, but, I've seen them twice ;) Where there's a will, there's a way.BigJoeRockHead (talk) 22:51, 8 July 2012 (UTC)

Talk:LeBron James/GA1

Hello. I have reviewed the GA nomination of this article, and unfortunately due to referencing/BLP and manual of style concerns, have chosen to fail the nomination at this time. I have left my remarks at the review page above. Please consider responding to them anyway and renominating when you feel the issues have been resolved. Once you have, I would be willing to re-review a new GA nomination. Regards, Resolute 22:55, 6 October 2012 (UTC)

Your GA nomination of A Dramatic Turn of Events

The article A Dramatic Turn of Events you nominated as a good article has been placed on hold . The article is close to meeting the good article criteria, but there are some minor changes or clarifications needed to be addressed. If these are fixed within 7 days, the article will pass, otherwise it will fail. See Talk:A Dramatic Turn of Events for things which need to be addressed. Tomcat (7) 13:36, 3 January 2013 (UTC)

Your GA nomination of A Dramatic Turn of Events

The article A Dramatic Turn of Events you nominated as a good article has failed ; see Talk:A Dramatic Turn of Events for reasons why the nomination failed. If or when these points have been taken care of, you may apply for a new nomination of the article. Tomcat (7) 11:33, 18 January 2013 (UTC)

LeBron James editing

Thanks for your efforts to clean up LeBron James. You seem to be removing a lot of detail with your cleanup. Are you sure this is the right thing to do?--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 06:15, 19 February 2013 (UTC)

Tony, thank you for noticing the clean-up! Removing detail is always hard to do, but I believe that if that article is ever to get to GA status, some fat needs to be trimmed. At the end of the day, we don't really need things like, "LeBron scored 30 points that game, becoming the sixth player to do so since X, Y, and Z". We don't want to remove detail, but we also don't want to include information that only die-hards would appreciate.--Ktmartell (talk) 03:11, 20 February 2013 (UTC)

I generally agree with Ktmartell. My only caveat would be areas that are mentioned multiple times outside of WP:ROUTINE game recaps. WP:CONTINUEDCOVERAGE would seem to filter out a lot of random statistics and trivial facts.—Bagumba (talk) 17:07, 27 February 2013 (UTC)

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	Appreciate your copyedit skills on LeBron James, especially on the occasional content you believe does not belong. Keep up the good work. —Bagumba (talk) 17:00, 27 February 2013 (UTC)

LeBron James

After a quick look, I would say you are close. The obvious referencing concerns I brought up in the GA review appear to be handled. You still need to cite the salary table and awards, however. A citation for his career statistics would be preferable. For my hockey articles, I tend to cover that with a general citation (as noted in the references section of this example). Overall though, I would say you are definitely very close to being there. Cheers! Resolute 04:48, 28 April 2013 (UTC)

LeBron James GA Review

Hi, Ktmartell. I have reviewed LeBron James and have placed the article on hold, for a couple of minor issues. Check out the review to see what needs to be resolved and let me know if you have any questions. Thanks, Red Phoenix ^{build the future...remember the past...} 16:36, 15 May 2013 (UTC)

LeBron

OK, glad you're OK with that header. Zagalejo^^^ 16:59, 27 May 2013 (UTC)

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LeBron James Category

Hi Ktmartell, Should I add LeBron James to the category National Basketball association players or will that be repetitive since it already mentions the NBA in another category?

In addition, why did you take off the "in the world" I said have led many basketball analysts, experts, and writers to consider him the best player in the NBA today and in the world ? You didn't state a reason when you edited it.

Robert (talk) 20:23, 24 June 2013 (UTC)

Hi Rob. Unfortunately, I am not sure whether you should add LeBron to the National Basketball association players category. To be honest, I'm not even sure what that is!

The reason why I removed "in the world" is not because it's wrong. LeBron is obviously the best in the world! It's just that on Wikipedia, that kind of thing is a little over-the-top. If you disagree, please feel free to take it to the LeBron Talk section and see what others have to say. I don't mean to be rude for taking it out, I just know that Featured Article reviewers are real fussy over that sort of thing.--Ktmartell (talk) 03:04, 26 June 2013 (UTC)

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