Talk:Virgin Islands at the 2016 Summer Paralympics/GA1
Latest comment: 5 years ago by Gonzo fan2007 in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Gonzo fan2007 (talk · contribs) 16:51, 31 August 2018 (UTC)
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Hi Courcelles! I will complete a quick c/e of the article first. Feel free to revert any of the changes, as I will only make what I feel are non-controversial improvements. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 16:51, 31 August 2018 (UTC)
- Copyedit
- Here is my copyedit.
- Prose & MOS
- The acronym USVI is not mentioned anywhere in the article. Please define in the first use of United States Virgin Islands (USVI).
- Need consistent linking with Ivan Espinosa. he is linked in the infobox, but not the first use in the lead. Recommend if linking, per WP:DUPLINK, to link in the infobox, first time in the lead, and the table at the end.
- Cerebral palsy is linked twice. Recommend removing second link. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 17:03, 31 August 2018 (UTC)
- Images
- No images used, except country flag, which is PD. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 16:51, 31 August 2018 (UTC)
- References
- Reference 4 needs thew author Laura Hale.
- Reference 5 needs "PARALYMPIC NEWS SERVICE" in the citation.
- Reference 6 needs the author Andrew McGarry.
- All other references look good. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 17:02, 31 August 2018 (UTC)
- Overall
- Overall, similar to past articles. Looks good, will put on hold. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 17:02, 31 August 2018 (UTC)
- Thanks again, Gonzo_fan2007, have dealt with everything! Courcelles (talk) 18:15, 2 September 2018 (UTC)
- Looks good! Passed. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 19:52, 2 September 2018 (UTC)