Talk:Virgin Islands at the 2016 Summer Paralympics
Latest comment: 6 years ago by Gonzo fan2007 in topic GA Review
Virgin Islands at the 2016 Summer Paralympics has been listed as one of the Sports and recreation good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it. Review: September 2, 2018. (Reviewed version). |
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Reviewer: Gonzo fan2007 (talk · contribs) 16:51, 31 August 2018 (UTC)
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Hi Courcelles! I will complete a quick c/e of the article first. Feel free to revert any of the changes, as I will only make what I feel are non-controversial improvements. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 16:51, 31 August 2018 (UTC)
- Copyedit
- Here is my copyedit.
- Prose & MOS
- The acronym USVI is not mentioned anywhere in the article. Please define in the first use of United States Virgin Islands (USVI).
- Need consistent linking with Ivan Espinosa. he is linked in the infobox, but not the first use in the lead. Recommend if linking, per WP:DUPLINK, to link in the infobox, first time in the lead, and the table at the end.
- Cerebral palsy is linked twice. Recommend removing second link. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 17:03, 31 August 2018 (UTC)
- Images
- No images used, except country flag, which is PD. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 16:51, 31 August 2018 (UTC)
- References
- Reference 4 needs thew author Laura Hale.
- Reference 5 needs "PARALYMPIC NEWS SERVICE" in the citation.
- Reference 6 needs the author Andrew McGarry.
- All other references look good. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 17:02, 31 August 2018 (UTC)
- Overall
- Overall, similar to past articles. Looks good, will put on hold. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 17:02, 31 August 2018 (UTC)
- Thanks again, Gonzo_fan2007, have dealt with everything! Courcelles (talk) 18:15, 2 September 2018 (UTC)
- Looks good! Passed. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 19:52, 2 September 2018 (UTC)