Talk:Unlimited Saga

Latest comment: 3 years ago by Yoninah in topic Did you know nomination

Untitled edit

I am planning on at least de-stubbing this article, but I really like this game, so some bias will probably slip in. Could someone else check it for NPOV? Thank you! Y0u (Y0ur talk page) (Y0ur contributions) 15:55, July 18, 2005 (UTC)

I utterly despise this game, but what you wrote looks okay to me. Slicing 21:10, 8 August 2005 (UTC)Reply

PEGI Rating Duality? edit

What is up with the PEGI rating appearing over the description body like that? I tried to edit it out and the only time it appears in the editable body is in the infobox section. Someone mind fixing it? 63.233.15.205 07:00, 23 December 2005 (UTC)Reply

Edited it out. The information iself is gone from the infobox, but it doesn't appear above the article anymore. User:Eluorn 7:52, 08 January 2006

GA Review edit

This review is transcluded from Talk:Unlimited Saga/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Abryn (talk · contribs) 19:48, 10 June 2020 (UTC)Reply


GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar):   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):   d (copyvio and plagiarism):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  
Hi, sorry about the wait. Review will finish tonight. - Bryn (talk) (contributions) 20:29, 14 June 2020 (UTC)Reply

Gameplay

  • Found a couple issues, fixed them (typo, semicolon vs. colon)

Synopsis

Did you know nomination edit

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 15:51, 19 July 2020 (UTC)Reply

Improved to Good Article status by ProtoDrake (talk). Self-nominated at 06:25, 19 June 2020 (UTC).Reply

  •   ALT0 is not interesting, and ALT1 is sourced only to twitter. I'm also not sure ALT1 will be that interesting to people without much interest in video game consoles. Could you create some other hook ideas? CMD (talk) 17:25, 14 July 2020 (UTC)Reply
@Chipmunkdavis: I've added a couple of alternatives. --ProtoDrake (talk) 17:49, 14 July 2020 (UTC)Reply
ALT3 also relies on specialist interest/knowledge. ALT2 may work. Is there anything direct link in the sources between the game and the world tour cancellation? CMD (talk) 02:23, 15 July 2020 (UTC)`Reply
@Chipmunkdavis: I've done some research, and found I made a mistake in translation which I've corrected. It wasn't a world tour, but a lottery campaign by Sony where players would be sent to cities around the world chosen due to parallels with one of five game's setting, with the Unlimited Saga destination being Rome. --ProtoDrake (talk) 07:48, 15 July 2020 (UTC)Reply
Could that be fit into a hook? CMD (talk) 09:02, 15 July 2020 (UTC)Reply
@Chipmunkdavis: I've added another alternative. It probably needs a rewrite. --ProtoDrake (talk) 09:50, 15 July 2020 (UTC)Reply
Replace "used in" with "planned for use in", remove "campaign", and replace "North America" with "the United States" and I think it reads well. CMD (talk) 10:34, 15 July 2020 (UTC)Reply
@Chipmunkdavis: Done. --ProtoDrake (talk) 10:54, 15 July 2020 (UTC)Reply
  ALT2 and AGF ALT4. CMD (talk) 11:42, 15 July 2020 (UTC)Reply