Talk:Preppie! (video game)
Latest comment: 4 years ago by Namcokid47 in topic GA Review
 | Preppie! (video game) was nominated as a Video games good article, but it did not meet the good article criteria at the time (November 8, 2019). There are suggestions on the review page for improving the article. If you can improve it, please do; it may then be renominated. |
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Reviewer: Namcokid47 (talk · contribs) 14:45, 8 November 2019 (UTC)
I'll review this soon. Namcokid47 (Contribs) 14:45, 8 November 2019 (UTC)
Unfortunately, I'm gonna have to fail this nomination. Reading through this article I notice a plethora of issues, including:
- Lots of really poor writing in places. Examples include "Preppie!'s gameplay follows the design established by Frogger: cross lanes of traffic, then maneuver across water by jumping on floating objects.", "Preppie! was considered to have some of the best visuals and audio for the Atari computers and was well-received by contemporary critics", etc.
- No gameplay screenshot
- Refs 1, 6, 13, 14 and 16 do not appear reliable.
- I don't see why the Web Archive link in External links needs to be there, nor do I see the purpose of the "See Also" section with mildly-related games.
- The comments by the reviewers should not just be a list of random comments they made, they should be weaved together into sentences.
Namcokid47 (Contribs) 15:00, 8 November 2019 (UTC)