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A fact from George Morison Robertson appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 8 June 2017 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:
Did you know... that George Morison Robertson, a Scottish expatriate in Hawaii, married a shipwrecked Englishwoman from Australia?
"at the request of" why would a king request someone to change their religion?
Kamehameha IV wanted supporters to join the new church.
Cite 15 has "archived copy" as its title
Changed.
That's about all, very nice work. I'll make a second pass tomorrow
File:George Morison Robertson.jpg needs a PD-US tag
Added.
What makes source #1 a reliable source?
I removed it from most of the paragraphs since it was unnecessary. But it is the only one that mentions his parents' name, and that he had seven children, most other sources ignores Margaret Ann Robertson who died really young.
[1] should have most of the info about George Humphreys Robertson
you can probably remove some of the stuff on James William if you can't find a reliable source for it
that should probably allow you to remove the Mini Biographies of Scots and Scots Descendants citations. There's also an oral history where they appear to reference in-hand materials. I know, WP:Interviews, but I just don't think I can promote this to GA with Mini Biographies of Scots... referenced, because to me it's just a web-page with nothing to make it reliable.
That should do it. Removed the last one and replace them with better quality sources. KAVEBEAR (talk) 23:43, 9 April 2020 (UTC)Reply
for citation #11, why does it take eight pages to cite one sentence?
Each page marks a session of the house and he was speaker for each of those sessions between 1852 to 1859.
#16, #19 and #1 are the same source
16 and 19 are difference sources (articles) by the same author.
#25 and #4 are the same
Difference sources, same website. One is records for son and the other is record for himself.
Thanks for responding! I'm satified that this article meets the GA criteria, it's well written, well referenced, illustrated, doesn't contain copyvio and follows the MOS well. Happy to promote! Nice work! Eddie891TalkWork 00:15, 10 April 2020 (UTC)Reply