Talk:Football Glory

GA Review

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 20:26, 6 May 2021 (UTC)

Comments

• "One (against an..." this feels awkward. I would say it's a one- or two-player game and then describe how each mode works. Perhaps even just leave it as one/two player for the lead.

   Simplified. IceWelder [✉] 00:05, 9 May 2021 (UTC)

• "on varying pitches" perhaps "various" unless you mean the pitch itself changes.

   Simplified. IceWelder [✉] 00:05, 9 May 2021 (UTC)

• "with London-based " no need to link London.

   Done. IceWelder [✉] 00:05, 9 May 2021 (UTC)

• Was the successor game not notable enough for an article?

  Doubtful; I found just one review and overall coverage is scarce. IceWelder [✉] 00:05, 9 May 2021 (UTC)

• "They play with" Perhaps more like "Clubs available for selection by the players are from..." or similar?

   Reworded. IceWelder [✉] 00:05, 9 May 2021 (UTC)

• "National teams star in..." feature rather than star.

   Reworded. IceWelder [✉] 00:05, 9 May 2021 (UTC)

• "and English League" -> "English Football League"

   Done. IceWelder [✉] 00:05, 9 May 2021 (UTC)

• "the MS-DOS port" link port.

   Done. IceWelder [✉] 00:05, 9 May 2021 (UTC)

• "refereeing decision, they can chase down and argue with the referee" link referee for "refereeing" not wait until "referee".

   Done. IceWelder [✉] 00:05, 9 May 2021 (UTC)

• "from London. He talked with Croteam all day" don't link London and I doubt it was "all day"...

  The source says "all day", albeit a direct quote from Holmes. The implication is that they worked much longer per day than usual, causing Holmes's odd 50/10 sleep rhythm.  Reworded. IceWelder [✉] 00:05, 9 May 2021 (UTC)

• "about five-a-side football"" featuring?

   Done. IceWelder [✉] 00:05, 9 May 2021 (UTC)

• If you use access dates, do it consistently.

  Access dates are set for those sources that I could actually access. I never really 'accessed' the Croteam pages as they have been dead for decades; I only ever accessed the archives. Should I still add access dates for these? IceWelder [✉] 00:05, 9 May 2021 (UTC)

  No, it's fine I understand your approach. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 08:00, 9 May 2021 (UTC)

A very nice article, good work. I'll put it on hold while these points are discussed. Cheers. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 20:18, 8 May 2021 (UTC)

@The Rambling Man: Thanks for the review. I made some changes and left individual comments above. Regards, IceWelder [✉] 00:05, 9 May 2021 (UTC)

All good, happy to promote this, nice work. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 08:00, 9 May 2021 (UTC)

Did you know nomination

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The result was: promoted by Vaticidalprophet (talk) 10:27, 23 May 2021 (UTC)

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• ... that the video game Football Glory features its developers in the Croatia national football team? Source: Football Glory review in Amiga Action issue 64, page 29. - Center image: "Surprise surprise as the Croatian team are all included! Hang on, that looks like the programmer's name". The adjacent screenshot shows several developer names, such as Tomislav Mučić, Marko Sekulić, Tomislav Pongrac, Alen Ladavac, and others.
  • ALT1:... that the video game Football Glory features hooligans and streakers invading the pitch? Source: "7 crazy sports games that break all the rules" - "While Football Glory adopted a similar art style to Sensible Soccer, it attempted to liven things up a little by having hooligans and streakers invade the pitch, chased by police officers, ..."

• Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Road Rash 3

Improved to Good Article status by IceWelder (talk). Self-nominated at 11:35, 9 May 2021 (UTC).

• New enough GA. QPQ present. Interesting hooks check out to included sources which are cited in the article in the required places—I definitely prefer ALT0. No other textual issues that I see. Great work. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 06:35, 12 May 2021 (UTC)

Talos Principle II mentions this game

I just came across a scene early in Talos Principle II that specifically mentions this game and its release year. Is there a known link between these two games? 2601:601:827F:70D0:9754:608:B651:B62C (talk) 00:50, 12 November 2023 (UTC)

They're by the same developer, but that's probably it. IceWelder [✉] 10:53, 12 November 2023 (UTC)