Wikipedia:WikiProject Military history/Peer review/Arado Ar E.381/Archive1

I think this article is now ready for peer review, since I have taken it to B-class, and am wishing to be able to make content additions and edit the prose and I would like other editors to help me. AirplaneProRadioChecklist 00:18, 30 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Nick-D

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This is a very interesting article. My suggestions for further development are:

  • "In the end of the war" is a bit vague - can you provide an approximate date?
  Completed Do you think it's all right now?
  • The article could do with a copy edit
  Completed listed with the requests page at WP:GOCE
  • It would be interesting if the article discussed how it was intended to employ the aircraft in combat, and the feasibility of these plans - am I right in thinking that it was to be launched as a stand-off weapon from other aircraft? (which of course means that it was highly vulnerable to these carrier aircraft being attacked)
  • Similarly, the article should identify why the project was cancelled (presumably as it proved impractical). Nick-D (talk) 01:58, 1 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
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Buckshot06

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There needs to be some description of the test flights and how they went; test pilots; problems/changes/solutions, and if possible some of the connected politicking. Buckshot06 (talk) 10:08, 5 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
I don't have sources. WikiCopterRadioChecklist 01:19, 7 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Also much much more detail about how and why the project was cancelled; what were the resources diverted to? Buckshot06 (talk) 10:10, 5 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Same here. WikiCopterRadioChecklist 01:19, 7 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]