Wikipedia:Peer review/DNA Resequencer (Stargate)/archive2

A lot have been improved since the last review. Is there anything still to be done? Thanks! --Tango 13:24, 19 August 2006 (UTC)[reply]

I would say that the lead is a tad big. Maybe cut down a paragraph? American Patriot 1776 02:05, 5 September 2006 (UTC)[reply]

That's a good sugestion. It is a bit big. When I have more time i'll see what I can do. Tobyk777 02:14, 5 September 2006 (UTC)[reply]