Wikipedia:Good article reassessment/Demon Murder Trial/1

Demon Murder Trial edit

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Result: delist Having examined the article closely I find that it is not in fact well written, there is some close paraphrasing of source material and events which are in reality allegations are presented as fact. I agree that it reads more like a story than an encyclopaedia article. Jezhotwells (talk) 08:03, 9 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Seeking community reassessment for the Demon Murder Trial article on the grounds that it does not meet the first criterion for GA status, in that it is not well-written.

The article requires work to improve grammar and style, and currently reads as if it were a story rather than an encyclopaedic article, containing phrases such as 'It was then they decided not to take the rental property because it was evil.' Helenabella (talk) 12:56, 9 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]

I'll be taking the lead on the corrections to the article, so we can get it back to sparkly GA shape. Judgesurreal777 (talk) 14:04, 9 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Could you list some of the specific issues you see with examples? I'd like to get started with the articles repair. Judgesurreal777 (talk) 16:31, 9 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]

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