Wikipedia:Featured picture candidates/Chicken egg diagram2

Renominated chicken egg diagram edit

Voting period is over. Please don't add any new votes. Voting period ends on 10 Jun 2017 at 01:47:55 (UTC)

Original – Diagram of a chicken egg in its ninth day of incubation showing all four extraembryonic membranes along with the embryo, the air pocket, and the shell

Reason: Scalable vector diagram is raster-free, fonts are all correctly sized and have alternate font family, file passes W3C validation, renders correctly in Firefox as well as Google Chrome and is expected to render correctly in any browser, image has been added to several articles (listed below) for more than seven days and remains in each; I also think the diagram has improved a great deal since my previous nomination of it, see for yourself if you like
Articles in which this image appears: Egg, Chorion, Amnion, Allantois
FP category for this image: Wikipedia:Featured pictures/Sciences/Biology
Creator: KDS4444

Support as nominator – KDS4444 (talk) 01:47, 31 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]
Oppose until Support after "albumin" corrected to "albumen". --Janke | Talk 08:50, 31 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Hm. Okay. Consider it done. (...Would have been a lot nicer, though, if you had just said, "Could you correct the spelling of 'albumin' to 'albumen'? Because I think this is a great diagram and it just needs a small correction to get my total support!" "Oppose" makes it seem to me that you oppose the nomination. Which makes me think I am wasting my time by making your correction. Not that you are wrong, of course, only that you could be nicer about the mistake. I am a volunteer graphic artist— please don't forget that, okay? I will make the correction.) KDS4444 (talk) 14:34, 31 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]

I'm a man of few words, contrary to covfefe. ;-) --Janke | Talk 15:05, 31 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]

I haven't eaten a single egg since this diagram first was nominated. Sca (talk) 15:56, 31 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]

@Sca: I know, me too— my diagram of the scallop ruined the appetite of a number of people I know who used to like having them as tapas. --KDS4444 (talk) 01:06, 2 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Comment – The unidentified bright area on the top left of Vitellus is large enough and pronounced enough to be a distinct feature on its own. If it is just a visual aid, it is too pronounced. imo. Bammesk (talk) 01:09, 1 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Indeed, now it looks like another air pocket. --Janke | Talk 15:45, 1 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Done, plus a few other minor mods I've been considering. How 'bout now? KDS4444 (talk) 01:01, 2 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Support – though I prefer a somewhat brighter (less contrasty) embryo, also it may be better if the Vitellus label-line was angled and didn't go through the air pocket, just saying. Bammesk (talk) 02:07, 2 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Done and done! Your wish is my covfefe!KDS4444 (talk) 15:24, 2 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]

One more, Allantois label-line terminates on the shadow. Bammesk (talk) 14:03, 3 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]

@Bammesk: I totally missed your comment above before the voting period was over, but I have now gone back and fixed this— thank you for pointing this out! This is exactly the kind of thing I would never have noticed myself but which should have been done, and without your comment, would never have taken place (probably). So my thanks, again, for that! KDS4444 (talk) 23:15, 29 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Support - high quality, encyclopedic diagram. Kaldari (talk) 05:08, 2 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]
Support per Kaldari. — Chris Woodrich (talk) 01:18, 3 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]
Support - Quality is good enough. EV is exceptional. Étienne Dolet (talk) 05:07, 9 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]
Support - Marvellous Spider-Man 12:17, 9 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Promoted File:Chicken egg diagram.svg --Armbrust ^{The Homunculus} 20:36, 10 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]