Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/List of historic places in Upper Hutt/archive1

List of historic places in Upper Hutt

Featured list candidates/List of historic places in Upper Hutt/archive1

Nominator(s): Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 06:35, 24 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Oh, hey, forgot to do one of these for a while. Here's another one for Heritage New Zealand's registry of historic sites; still got a long way to go to get through all of these! Upper Hutt is a small commuter town outside Wellington, but it has a suprising amount of cool historic architecture, including a number of fashionable houses by James Chapman-Taylor, one of New Zealand's most notable architects. Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 06:35, 24 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Alavense

The table needs a caption.
- It has one, no? - G
I don't think the sticky header is working.
- I realized I don't really need the sticky header for this one, since it's a fairly short list. - G
No issues with the prose.
Wouldn't it be better to use a <br> between "List" and "number"? There seems to be an excessive gap in between.
- Ooh good point. Fixed. - G
In the source, it reads "Historic area". Why capitalize the "a" in the text and in the table?
- That's a good point, decapitalised. - G
In the caption of the first image, again: is it necessary to capitalize "Historic Place"?
- Ditto. - G
There's no reference for Remutaka Incline Rail Trail.
- Oops. Fixed. - G

That's all I saw. Nice and thorough work, Generalissima. Alavense (talk) 09:19, 25 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Alavense: Fixed! Thank you very much. Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 16:34, 26 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

One more thing, Generalissima. "Upper Hutt City is a city" reads a bit redundant. I think "Upper Hutt is a city" would be better. Thanks for your edits. Alavense (talk) 06:29, 30 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Alavense Ah, good point! fixed. Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 09:54, 30 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for your prompt responses, Generalissima. Support. Alavense (talk) 11:03, 30 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

" jail, private residence, and scouting center" - given that we are dealing with a Commonwealth country, I think the last word should be spelt "centre"
- Oop, yep. - G
"although plaster and jarrah timber was also heavily used" => "although plaster and jarrah timber were also heavily used"
- Fixed. - G
"the area became a mobilization camp" => "the area became a mobilisation camp"
- Fixed. - G
"A veterinary center constructed " => "A veterinary centre constructed "
- Fixed. - G
"It served as the main veterinary research center" => "It served as the main veterinary research centre"
- Fixed. - G
"Now owned and managed by the Golder's Homestead Museum Society." => "It is now owned and managed by the Golder's Homestead Museum Society."
- Fixed. - G
That's all I got - nice work! -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 11:55, 28 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- @ChrisTheDude: Thank you so much, fixed! Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 15:54, 28 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Support -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 22:24, 28 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hey man im josh

Source review: Passed

Reliable enough for the information being cited
Consistent date formatting
Consistent and proper reference formatting
Appropriate wikilinks where applicable
Spot checks on 15 sources match what they are being cited for

Feedback:

Let's Wikilink New Zealand in the lead
Downcase "(Former)" in the name column
Downcase "(Library)" in the name column
Trentham isn't linked in the location column for the St John's Church entry, link it there for consistency
Golder's House Food Store – Link Upper Hutt in the location column for consistency

Please ping me when the above issues have been addressed. Hey man im josh (talk) 16:14, 29 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Hey man im josh: Fixed! Thank you very much. Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 17:04, 29 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Support. Hey man im josh (talk) 18:34, 29 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]