Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/List of awards and nominations received by Kylie Minogue/archive1
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The list was promoted by PresN via FACBot (talk) 21:16:33 25 April 2019 (UTC) [1].
List of awards and nominations received by Kylie Minogue edit
List of awards and nominations received by Kylie Minogue (edit | talk | history | protect | delete | links | watch | logs | views)
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I'm nominating this for featured list because it meets the criteria for a featured list. Look forward to your comments and suggestions. Damian Vo (talk) 14:27, 13 March 2019 (UTC)[reply]
- Support from Aoba47
- I do not believe there should be a full stop for the infobox image caption as it is not a complete sentence.
- For this part (she became the first person to win four Logie Awards at one event, and the youngest Gold Logie recipient at nineteen), I do not believe the comma after “event” is needed.
- I have two comments for the image of Olympiapark, Munich. I do not think the image caption should have a full stop because it is not a full sentence. And I would also add ALT text to the image.
- I have a question about the citation method used for books. I see two methods currently being used in the article. The Smith source includes the page number in the “References” part and links down to the full citation in the “Sources” section, while the Baker/Minogue source has the full citation in the “References” part. I would be consistent with one citation style. It is completely up to you on which way to go.
Wonderful work with the list. I can tell that a lot of work has been put into the list. Minogue has a long career so it means more work on tracking down the references for each award. My comments above are rather nitpicky. Once they are addressed, I will be more than happy to support this for promotion. Have a wonderful rest of your day and/or night! Aoba47 (talk) 19:03, 13 March 2019 (UTC)[reply]
- Thanks for the review, Aoba47. I made some changes per your suggestions above. Let me know what you think. Damian Vo (talk) 12:43, 15 March 2019 (UTC)[reply]
- Comments from ChrisTheDude
- "released her self-titled debut album, Kylie in 1988" - needs a comma after the title too, to close the subordinate clause
- "Her subsequent studio albums....were nominated for ARIA Award for Best Female Artist." - firstly it should be "the ARIA Award". But more importantly, if the award is Best Female Artist then it wasn't the albums that were nominated, it was Kylie herself
- "her duet with rock band Nick Cave and the Bad Seeds, "Where the Wild Roses Grow" won" - missing closing comma again
- "which was nominated ARIA Award for Album of the Year." => "which was nominated for the ARIA Award for Album of the Year."
- "Its lead single, "Can't Get You Out of My Head" garnered" => missing closing comma again
- "were nominated for Grammy Award for Best Dance Recording, winning the latter in 2004" => "were nominated for the Grammy Award for Best Dance Recording, the latter winning in 2004"
- "For her work as songwriter in "Love at First Sight"" - someone can't be a songwriter "in" a song. "For" would be better.
- "Phonographic Performance Company of Australia ranked" => "The Phonographic Performance Company of Australia ranked"
- "by Australian Recording Industry Association" => "from the Australian Recording Industry Association"
- "her contribution to the Australian live entertainment" => "her contribution to Australian live entertainment"
- "honorary Doctor of Health Science degree by Anglia Ruskin University" => "honorary Doctor of Health Science degree from Anglia Ruskin University"
- "for services to Music" - no reason for capital M here
- "for contribution to the improving of relations between Britain and Australia" => "for her contribution to improving relations between Britain and Australia"
- I can just about remember enough of my schoolboy French to know that "Chevalier de Ordre des Arts et des Lettres" should be "Chevalier de l'Ordre des Arts et des Lettres"
- Note b - again, you can't be a songwriter "in" a song. Use "for" instead.
- Think that's it from me........ -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 19:43, 13 March 2019 (UTC)[reply]
- Thank you for your feedback. I fixed everything you mention above. Damian Vo (talk) 12:43, 15 March 2019 (UTC)[reply]
- I made one little English grammar fix but am now happy to support -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 20:19, 15 March 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Support Looks good to me. Very impressive article. A lot of work has obviously gone into it. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 20:07, 26 March 2019 (UTC)[reply]
- Comments from Eurohunter
- Why awards name in the plural form? She received one "American Choreography Award" not "American Choreography Awards". Eurohunter (talk) 19:12, 19 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]
- Many FL cite awards name in plural form ([2], [3], [4]) Damian Vo (talk) 03:01, 20 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]
- There is even "Award" instead of "Category". How is this possible? Eurohunter (talk) 15:31, 20 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Support – Sorry I completely forgot to support this a while ago. Hard to believe you can be nominated for so many 'best' and 'worst' awards during your career (in some cases for the same thing). I still liked her in "Voyage of the Damned" – BeatlesLedTV (talk) 02:55, 23 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Source review passed, promoting. --PresN 21:16, 25 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]
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