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List of awards and nominations received by Kyla edit

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Nominator(s): Pseud 14 (talk) 22:36, 3 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]

With my earlier nomination gaining at least three supports and a source review completed, here's another list of awards and nominations of a Filipino personality. This time it's from singer Kyla, who first came to prominence back in 2000, and whose R&B and soul sound helped usher the genres popularity into Filipino music, earning many accolades for her contributions. Happy to address your comments and thanks to all who take the time to review the list. Pseud 14 (talk) 22:36, 3 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Aoba47 edit

  • I have a clarification question about this part, (after appearing in the television talent show Metropop Star Search in 1997). What do you mean by "appearing in"? It seems like she was a contestant, but this should be clarified more explicitly in the prose. Was she a winner, finalist, etc.? I think some brief clarification would be better here than the current wording, which I find too vague.
I have revised and clarified that she appeared as a finalist.
  • For this part, (Kyla's third effort), I would avoid the word "effort" in this context as I just think that it looks rather off.
I have used studio album in this context instead.
  • There are two points in the lead that "while" is used as a transition. This wording is often used as a way to either contrast two different concepts or discussing things happening at the same time and since neither is the case in these two instance, I would encourage you to use different word choices for both.
A silly mistake of its use on my part. Revised to avoid confusion
  • For the Google Books citations, you should use the page numbers and mark them as coming from Google Books.
Added "via" parameter in the citations.

That should be everything, but I will re-read the list sometime tomorrow. I hope these comments are helpful. Best of luck with this FLC. Aoba47 (talk) 02:03, 4 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you very much for taking this review Aoba47. Really appreciate it. I have addressed your comments and made the changes. Let me know if I may have missed anything. Pseud 14 (talk) 02:59, 4 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you for addressing everything. I support this FLC for promotion based on the prose. Aoba47 (talk) 14:43, 4 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you very much for your support Aoba47. Pseud 14 (talk) 15:04, 4 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Comments
  • "In 2005, Kyla and Jerome John Hughes released [....] and teamed with Jay R on the main theme of the comedy drama Say That You Love Me" - the both teamed with Jay R....?
  • "from her eight studio album" => "from her eighth studio album"
  • "which won Best Rock Video at 2013 Myx Music Awards" => "which won Best Rock Video at the 2013 Myx Music Awards"
  • "won competition's the top honor" => "won the competition's top honor"
  • That's it, I think :-) -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 07:18, 4 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you very much for your review ChrisTheDude, and for catching these omissions and silly mistakes. Above comments have been addressed. Let me know if I may have missed anything. Pseud 14 (talk) 13:49, 4 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you for your edits and support. Pseud 14 (talk) 15:04, 4 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Comments
  • "Filipino singer Kyla has received numerous awards and nominations for her contributions in music." ---> "Filipino singer Kyla has received numerous awards and nominations for her contributions to music."
  • "She rose to prominence after appearing as a finalist in the television talent show Metropop Star Search in 1997." --> "She rose to prominence after appearing as a finalist on the television talent show Metropop Star Search in 1997"
  • "She signed a record deal with EMI Philippines and worked with producer Chito Ilacad and songwriter Arnie Mendaros for her debut studio album Way to Your Heart, which was released in 2000." ----> "She signed a record deal with EMI Philippines and worked with producer Chito Ilacad and songwriter Arnie Mendaros on her debut studio album Way to Your Heart, which was released in 2000."
  • "Kyla was a recipient of Best New Artist accolades at the Awit Awards, Aliw Awards, and MTV Pilipinas Music Awards." ----> "Kyla has received Best New Artist accolades at the Awit Awards, Aliw Awards, and MTV Pilipinas Music Awards. "
  • "The same year, she headlined the Not Just Your Ordinary Girl concert at the Araneta Coliseum in support of the album." ---> "The same year, she headlined the Not Just Your Ordinary Girl concert at the Araneta Coliseum to support the album."
  • "Kyla released a cover of the 1989 ballad "Love Will Lead You Back", from her tribute album Heartfelt (2007). ---> "Kyla released a cover of the 1989 ballad "Love Will Lead You Back" from her tribute album Heartfelt (2007)." (remove comma)

Otherwise good. --TheUzbek (talk) 12:44, 7 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for your review TheUzbek. All comments actioned. Let me know if I missed anything. Pseud 14 (talk) 14:27, 7 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks for your support TheUzbek. I'll have a look at your FLC in this week. Pseud 14 (talk) 21:38, 9 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]

NØ edit

I see this FLC has already had comments from some very capable hands. I've still done my due diligence as a reviewer and given this a customary read. Here are my comments:

  • "the romantic drama Let the Love Begin" - Can we say "the romantic drama film Let the Love Begin"?
  • "The single received three nominations at the 2015 Awit Awards" - I don't like "the single" as wording variation in general so can we go with "the song"?
  • "tribute album Heartfelt" - Do we need the wikilink on "tribute album"? Seems like something most readers might be familiar with and it's a MOS:SOB.
That's it from me. Incredible work!--NØ 20:35, 15 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks very much for your review MaranoFan. All comments have been actioned. Pseud 14 (talk) 14:12, 16 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]
  • Support--NØ 14:13, 16 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Source review edit

I will try not to screw this up.

Version reviewed

Formatting

As a matter of consistency with other FLs and FAs, I use the "publisher" parameter for network news organizations i.e. GMA Network News, ABS-CBNnews.com, or ABS-CBN Entertainment. (similar to ABC News, CBS News)
  • fn 47: Forgive me for my ignorance, but why is it "Myx Philippines"? Isn't the channel already Filipino?
Changed to Myx
  • Per MOS:CONFORMTITLE, be consistent with capitalisation in citation titles (either all title-case (refer to MOS:5LETTER) or sentence-case)
Believe all should be in sentence case now (proper names like name of awards organizations/ceremony is capitalized)

Reliability

  • What makes Maxi-Media International a high-quality reliable source?
This actually came up in another source review where this citation was used as a replacement for a non-high quality source. Maxi Media is a production company, more or less the Philippine equivalent of Live Nation, that produces shows/live events. They also used to maintain a site which issues news articles and press releases.

Verifiability

  • fn 10: clear
  • fn 12: clear
  • fn 26: clear
  • fn 35: supports that she placed 3rd, not 2nd?
I believe placements other than Best Song, have been referred to as runner-ups (1st runner-up, 2nd runner-up, so on) At least in the context of how the tables in FLs have been referred to 2nd or 3rd place finishes.
  • fn 42: clear
  • fn 56: clear

Also, unrelated to the sources, but is there a reason Not Just Your Ordinary Girl isn't in quote marks or italics for the Aliw Awards?

Not Just Your Ordinary Girl is the name of the concert in support of Kyla's album. The Aliw Awards bestows recognition to live productions/live entertainment.

Overall, mostly very minor concerns. Ping me in your replies! Pamzeis (talk) 09:18, 18 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for taking up the source review Pamzeis. All comments addressed. Let me know if I may have missed anything. Pseud 14 (talk) 19:31, 18 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]
  • I think that's pass from me! Apologies for some pretty nitpicky comments. BTW, I'd appreciate any comments here. Pamzeis (talk) 13:26, 19 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]
  • No need to apologize and thanks for the thorough source review Pamzeis. I'll be happy to take a look at your FLC. Pseud 14 (talk) 20:08, 19 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Promoting. --PresN 17:33, 24 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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