Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/List of Seattle Kraken players/archive1

List of Seattle Kraken players

Featured list candidates/List of Seattle Kraken players/archive1

Nominator: XR228 (talk) 01:13, 30 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Yet another Seattle Kraken FL nom—this time it's their players. This should meet all the criteria. Thanks. XR228 (talk) 01:11, 30 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

The lead seems a tiny bit thin. Maybe you could add some info about the player with most games, most goals, etc.....?
"his captaincy starting in 2021, and ending 6 months later." - that comma is not needed
Not sure this is relevant to this article, but you say that a captain is the only one who can talk to the ref, yet the Kraken have only had a captain for six months out of their entire history? Does this mean that for the rest of the time nobody could talk to the ref?
Is the dagger really needed in the key given that it literally isn't used at all in the tables?
Beniers being the first ever draft choice need sourcing
Ref 5, the only one against the skaters table, does not support Beniers being a Calder Trophy winner
That's what I got -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 08:35, 30 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@ChrisTheDude: I have made the changes. XR228 (talk) 19:07, 30 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Support -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 20:30, 30 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Comments by Alavense

59 players, 4 goaltenders and 55 skaters (forwards and defenseman), have played - Lose that last comma.
In the caption of the first picture, Kraken is mentioned thrice. The second one, for example, could be replaced with a the team or something similar.
Captains are required to wear the letter "C" on their uniform for identification, which is 3 inches (7.6 cm) in height - I don't think that sentence is clear enough.
ending 6 months later - MOS:NUMERAL: "Integers from zero to nine are spelled out in words".
There's something wrong with Matty Beniers's caption.
Nat should be Nat. and Pos should be Pos.. Besides, please consider using {{abbr}} for those and also for the others.
There are no notes in the first table, so you can get rid of that empty column.

That's what I saw. Kind regards, Alavense (talk) 07:01, 2 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Alavense: I have made most of the changes. Could you let me know what is wrong with Matty Beniers's caption? Thanks XR228 (talk) 17:07, 2 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hi, XR228. There's a full stop followed by a word in lowercase. That needs fixing. Kind regards, Alavense (talk) 07:10, 3 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Alavense: I have fixed it. XR228 (talk) 22:26, 3 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you. Nice work. Support. Alavense (talk) 05:21, 4 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

MrLinkinPark333 verification check

Prose

Talk page is tagged with a synthesis issue and should be resolved.
"members of the Pacific Division of the Western Conference" - need an extra source next to HockeyDB to show they are members of the Western Conference.
"Since their arrival in 2021, 59 players, 4 goaltenders and 55 skaters (forwards and defenseman) have played in a Kraken jersey for at least one regular season game." - Needs a source here such as the HockeyDB roster list.
The Captain quote should start with "the privilege of discussing with the Referee" (capital R included).
"being 3 inches (7.6 cm)" - NHL says "approximately" not exactly.
There's an updated version of the NHL rules from 2023 in regards to Captain if you wish to use it.
"starting in 2021 and ending six months later" - "starting in October 2021 and ending five months later" (as Giordano held captaincy until March 2022).
"As the Kraken currently do not have a captain, they are allowed to name four alternate captains" - Condor 2021 source isn't needed here as it was already established that Giordano was captain. However, this sentence need an extra source next to Lukan 2022 source that shows the four alternative captains are still the case in 2024.
The Career Most points for the Kraken is referenced three times and should be once instead.
Most career goals for the Kraken is at a different link.
Most career assists for the Kraken is at this link.

Goaltenders table

This table needs extra source(s) as the majority of the regular season stats and all of the playoff stats are not included in HockeyDB. Only stat mentioned there is the games played.

Skaters table

This table needs an extra source as the playoff stats are not mentioned at HockeyDB.
Jared McCann was a left winger.
André Burakovsky was born in Austria.
Tye Kartye was a left winger.
Joonas Donskoi played from 2021-2022.
Marcus Johansson was a left winger.
Derrick Pouliot had 2 PIM in the regular season.
John Hayden was a center player.
Alexander True played from 2021-2022.
Logan Morrison was center.

Oppose for now. While there's a lot of verification issues, I'm mainly concerned with the synthesis tag and the majority of the goaltending stats being unreferenced. --MrLinkinPark333 (talk) 00:58, 6 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]