(Critique for Group 2): You guys worked really hard on this! Great job. There are a lot of citations throughout your paragraphs (they may not all be necessary) but your analysis of the documents is really thorough. I also think your choice of topic was interesting. I also liked that you had a few tables on your page, it made the information easier to conceptualize. Sagec (talk) 17:44, 25 January 2013 (UTC)