User talk:Reeya Mehta/sandbox

Latest comment: 6 years ago by Ashwin Kumar A P

Please do not use flowery language in your article. This is an encyclopedia. For example this is not an encyclopedic sentence:

"Have you ever imagined an area in this selfish world, there is some place where there are no prices for the food we eat in menu card. If we give a manual check on the right side of the menu card the prices tend to be zero(0.00).However, we can find a gratitude footnote with a pleasant mentioning “The meal which you took was a gift of love from someone who came just before you.”

Also, most of your references are from a common source.

Do not use "second person" pronouns like "you" "your" in an encyclopedic article. Write in an objective manner.

Ashwin Kumar A P (talk) 11:21, 21 April 2018 (UTC)Reply