Michelleg0296
| This user is a student editor in University_of_California_Berkeley/Development_and_the_Environment_(Fall_2017) . |
Sam's Peer Review
editYou give a clear explanation of what Environmental Impact Design is. I think I'd like to read a bit more about the examples you give. Some specifics about how this type of design was implemented in which positive externalities came about. Also, it seems like there is a mathematical element to EID. Perhaps a formula or some more numerical elements would strengthen your entry. I can tell you use your own words, so this is a great start to your final draft. I think a few more details and you will be in good shape. I took a look at your sources and they pass my credibility test.
Sadondakis (talk) 19:38, 22 November 2017 (UTC)
Caleb's Peer Review
editI like your definition of EID. It's very easily understandable and very encyclopedic. However, I'd like to read more about the examples of positive impacts of the EID's. I think you could organize that section a little better as well. I would also like to know a little more information of the three types of impacts. Overall, a very good start to the final draft.
Calebleechii (talk) 23:34, 22 November 2017 (UTC)