Your submission at Articles for creation: Karry G (April 12) edit

 
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microbiologyMarcus [petri dish·growths] 20:41, 12 April 2024 (UTC)Reply
 
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Welcome, Max Elliott1! edit

 
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Question edit

Hi, Max Elliott1, I think you need to look at [1] to improve the sources on your draft, please feel free to ask questions, thank you, Ozzie--Ozzie10aaaa (talk) 12:28, 2 May 2024 (UTC)Reply

Ozzie, I've already done some research on "reliable sources". Let me explain. The article I`m writing is about a DJ\singer. Out of the definition of a notable band/musician I do have a paragraph 5 that complies with that criterion: .... 'has released two or more albums on a major record label or on one of the more important indie labels (i.e., an independent label with a history of more than a few years, and with a roster of performers, many of whom are independently notable)'
How can I confirm this in the article? Should I provide links to releases? What other "reliable resources" should I provide?? Give me a clue.
Max Elliott1 (talk) 12:43, 2 May 2024 (UTC)Reply
[2] this is more specific as to 'reliable sources', --Ozzie10aaaa (talk) 12:43, 6 May 2024 (UTC)Reply

Question #2 edit

Ok, your draft is here [3], I did a few edits on it, however it needs more sources, please see link I provided (just above) for sources, thanks--Ozzie10aaaa (talk) 12:45, 6 May 2024 (UTC)Reply

Your submission at Articles for creation: Karry G (May 6) edit

 
Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by 331dot were: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.
331dot (talk) 21:01, 6 May 2024 (UTC)Reply