User talk:Luvvln/sandbox
Latest comment: 1 year ago by Charles Matthews in topic Comments
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Omit the initial definition of gentrification. The article should start with a topic sentence "Climate gentrification occurs ...".
The text generally needs to be concise and based on verifiable, factual assertions. For example what is written about Rose Dyson is anecdotal. This is the kind of journalism used to illustrate an issue, but it is not the kind of reference material that belongs in Wikipedia. The conclusions on Hurricane Sandy fail the test of being specific statements referenced to quality sources. Charles Matthews (talk) 10:03, 28 April 2023 (UTC)