User talk:Kaymyk/sandbox

Taylor Cook - Comments

What does the article (or section) do well? I like the layout and it was very easy to follow. What changes would you suggest overall?

Maybe consider comparing mechanical VS chemical exfoliation (pros and cons of each comparatively).

Talk about any positives of exfoliation in more depth if there are any.

The paragraph at the top of the mechanical and chemical sections may not need to list all of the types because you get into that later.

What is the most important thing that the author could do to improve his/her contribution?

I think that you definitely have a good start and could maybe benefit from some more detail, but it isn't necessary.

Did you glean anything from your classmate's work that could be applicable to your own? If so, let him/her know!

Mine definitely needs a better layout and needs to be easier to read.

Krystallite37 (talk) 18:15, 4 November 2022 (UTC)

peer review comments 11/4

What does the article (or section) do well?

Your article is very informative without being dense. The breakdown into sections makes it very easy to read. I appreciate how your tone is concise and neutral. Additionally, you cited sources frequently which adds to your credibility.

What changes would you suggest overall?

I think you could really benefit by adding some images of the various types of mechanical exfoliants you describe. It could make your article more visually interesting as well as help readers identify what you are talking about. I know you mentioned you have more to add so maybe you were already planning on this but I found your section on the history of chemical exfoliants very interesting. Maybe you could expand there.

What is the most important thing that the author could do to improve his/her contribution?

Add some pictures!

Did you glean anything from your classmate's work that could be applicable to your own? If so, let him/her know!

I liked how clean your organization was. I definitely need to break up my work into subsections like you did. Mcb182 (talk) 18:20, 4 November 2022 (UTC)