Flyview

AfC notification: Draft:Flywheel Exercise has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Flywheel Exercise. Thanks! Caleb Stanford (talk) 03:11, 30 December 2021 (UTC)

Thank you for commenting on the draft. I re-submitted some minutes ago. This is my first article on Wikipedia, and hence comments via Talk, hope this message goes through! In short You (Caleb Stanford and Greenman) declined my text for being copyrighted.. I interpreted this as being because I did not get my 50 references into the right style, and therefore it looked as I had only 1-3 references for my text. This was corrected now. (It was rather an effort, I have no experience with publishing directly on the computer, using all these format codes.) Another interpretation could be you found my text already written/published somewhere else. This is NOT the case! I have worked with muscle physiology, space medicine, orthopeadic trauma for 25 years and published 50 scientific articles (PubMed). I tried to write for the interested layman. The subject of flywheel (inertial) training is covered by about 200 scientific articles, mainly sports physiology, by 2021. Please advice what is considered inappropriate with the text, and I improve improve that part so that the review will be juste! I am aware of that images are yet not included in the text, I am working on how to import them from my Word-document where they are right now. I am uncertain how big image files sould be for Wikipedia/web format, and they were not imported with my first effort.. Best Regards Flyview /see also my user comments & disclaimers; inventor of Flywheel exercise principle in 1993.

Your submission at Articles for creation: Flywheel Exercise (December 30)

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Greenman (talk) 08:23, 30 December 2021 (UTC)

Hello, Flyview! Having an article declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Greenman (talk) 08:23, 30 December 2021 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Flywheel Exercise (January 4)

Your recent article submission has been rejected. If you have further questions, you can ask at the Articles for creation help desk or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help. The reason left by DGG was: This submission is contrary to the purpose of Wikipedia. The comment the reviewer left was: apparentlycopiedfrom elswhere

DGG ( talk ) 04:43, 4 January 2022 (UTC)

March 2022

Hello Flyview. The nature of your edits, such as the one you made to Draft:Flywheel Exercise, gives the impression you have an undisclosed financial stake in promoting a topic, but you have not complied with Wikipedia's mandatory paid editing disclosure requirements. Paid advocacy is a category of conflict of interest (COI) editing that involves being compensated by a person, group, company or organization to use Wikipedia to promote their interests. Undisclosed paid advocacy is prohibited by our policies on neutral point of view and what Wikipedia is not, and is an especially serious type of COI; the Wikimedia Foundation regards it as a "black hat" practice akin to black-hat search-engine optimization.

Paid advocates are very strongly discouraged from direct article editing, and should instead propose changes on the talk page of the article in question if an article exists. If the article does not exist, paid advocates are extremely strongly discouraged from attempting to write an article at all. At best, any proposed article creation should be submitted through the articles for creation process, rather than directly.

Regardless, if you are receiving or expect to receive compensation for your edits, broadly construed, you are required by the Wikimedia Terms of Use to disclose your employer, client and affiliation. You can post such a mandatory disclosure to your user page at User:Flyview. The template {{Paid}} can be used for this purpose – e.g. in the form: {{paid|user=Flyview|employer=InsertName|client=InsertName}}. If I am mistaken – you are not being directly or indirectly compensated for your edits – please state that in response to this message. Otherwise, please provide the required disclosure. In either case, do not edit further until you answer this message.
I note your user page COI declaration, but it appears that you may, broadly construed, derive a benefit from this draft, perhaps article, and from any business purveying this equipment. Please look at your declaration, and modify it as appropriate Fiddle^Timtrent Faddle^Talk to me 15:09, 6 March 2022 (UTC)

Hi Timrent, I have edited my COI declaration. Of course in the event of Mars mission using flywheel technology, I could be contacted for consultancy, or get involved in sports-gear production as in previous years, that in fact never gave me economic revenue. As disclosed, my payments for the current Wiki work is zero. Though I think the article on Flywheel exercise has notability and should be written, as my collegues often encourage. I see my text as a start to be edited and expanded by others involved in current sports and rehab applications; that are currently developing fast. /Sincerely Hans/Flyview Flyview (talk) 22:50, 7 March 2022 (UTC)

Concern regarding Draft:Flywheel Exercise

Hello, Flyview. This is a bot-delivered message letting you know that Draft:Flywheel Exercise, a page you created, has not been edited in at least 5 months. Drafts that have not been edited for six months may be deleted, so if you wish to retain the page, please edit it again or request that it be moved to your userspace.

If the page has already been deleted, you can request it be undeleted so you can continue working on it.

Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 04:01, 5 December 2022 (UTC)

Your draft article, Draft:Flywheel Exercise

Hello, Flyview. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Flywheel Exercise".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been deleted. When you plan on working on it further and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Liz ^{Read! Talk!} 03:06, 5 January 2023 (UTC)