User talk:Efcordova/Sexual victimization of Native American women

Your second sentence is inaccurate. "This is a huge issue, because non-Native American men commit the majority of assaults against Native American women." Please see that it is corrected should you try and attempt to move this into main space. [1]https://www.hcn.org/articles/tribal-affairs-why-native-american-women-still-have-the-highest-rates-of-rape-and-assault Indigenous girl (talk) 03:50, 19 June 2023 (UTC)

@Efcordova Please correct the above quote. Your source does not say what you are claiming,"Since then, multiple studies on the topic have confirmed the crisis: Native Americans are 2.5 times more likely to experience sexual assault and rape than any other ethnic group in the United States." There is not mention in this quote that the 2.5 mentioned is violence perpetrated by Native men against Native women. [2]https://www.hcn.org/articles/tribal-affairs-why-native-american-women-still-have-the-highest-rates-of-rape-and-assault You probably want to fix your link as well. Indigenous girl (talk) 00:35, 3 July 2023 (UTC)

I left detailed comments on potential improvements here: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Efcordova/Sexual_victimization_of_Native_American_women/Zeus_Aurelius_Peer_Review Zeus Aurelius (talk) 22:28, 21 June 2023 (UTC)