User talk:Beccabeckett/sandbox

Latest comment: 7 years ago by Belugawhale13

I think all the information you have is very good! I like how you differentiated the different types of sides effects. I also like how you have a description section for the mother, father and child because I thinks its important to differentiate the difference in each. I know you said that you are planning on editing the pre-existing article. After reading the existing article I think you should look to add more information in "mothers" part of the epidemiology section. There is little info for the "mothers" part and much more the "fathers" part. Belugawhale13 (talk) 03:38, 9 March 2017 (UTC)Belugawhale13Reply