User talk:AshleyMasse/Huacaya alpaca
Latest comment: 3 months ago by Elaw529 in topic Peer Review
Peer Review
editI really enjoyed reading this article. It flowed throughout very nicely, and it seemed like you had a lot of knowledge of the topic. I would just suggest adding a few sentences to wrap up the article as a whole because it seemed to stop a little abruptly. Overall, I think your draft is very strong. Lsm1041 (talk) 18:41, 11 March 2024 (UTC)
- I also reviewed this article and my comments can be found on the bottom of this page User:AshleyMasse/Huacaya alpaca/Elaw529 Peer Review Elaw529 (talk) 19:47, 24 March 2024 (UTC)