User:AshleyMasse/Huacaya alpaca/Elaw529 Peer Review

General info

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Whose work are you reviewing?

AshleyMasse

Link to draft you're reviewing
User:AshleyMasse/Huacaya alpaca
Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
Huacaya alpaca

Evaluate the drafted changes

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Its hard to decipher what was added to the article but from the looks of it you added many sources.

i worry some the sources arent very current like #5

you could add more of a lead (especially for each section)

you could add a table on the side that has there scientific classification and name (if you look at other pages like this one Sea otter, youll see an example)

population section could be expanded

love the use of pictures!