Template:Did you know nominations/Timing (Kim Hyun-joong album)

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Hawkeye7 (talk) 21:05, 15 September 2014 (UTC)

Timing (Kim Hyun-joong album) edit

Created by 001Jrm (talk). Self nominated at 06:57, 16 August 2014 (UTC).

  • Unfortunately, it seems as though this article, being about 28 days old, is much too old, since it has to be no more than seven days old to be eligible for a DYK. Sorry, it seems there's been a misunderstanding and the article isn't too old. I'm also somewhat unsure about the hook, since besides seeming a bit promotional, it isn't really borne out by the cited source, which says only that "As the past and the present mix together in one image, it raises the expectations for his upcoming album." This isn't quite the same as the hook's statement about his endeavours being reflected in the album, since the source doesn't even say that the past or present specifically influenced the recording of this album. Jinkinson talk to me 01:34, 10 September 2014 (UTC)
Hi there! I believe I've submitted my DYK nomination on time: the article was created on August 12 while its DYK template was created/posted on August 16th, 4 days after the article's creation. Therefore, its nomination was just here all along, waiting for others to review. :) For the hook, I can propose for some more if that's ok, and we may work on them together. (?) Hopefully, one of them would interest you. Thanks for reviewing! 001Jrm (talk) 02:28, 10 September 2014 (UTC)
ALT 2: ... that Kim Hyun-joong released his fourth EP Timing while touring worldwide?
ALT 3: ... that Kim Hyun-joong's fourth EP Timing includes four tracks with different music genres?
ALT 3: ... that barely a month after he released Hot Sun in Japan, Kim Hyun-joong released his fourth EP Timing in South Korea?
The article seems to be new enough and long enough, it seems to be unlikely that there is a copyvio, ALT 2 looks like it should be good to go, if we can modify the article so it explicitly says that Hyun-joong was on tour at the time this album was released. This source seems like it would work to cite for the tour thing. Jinkinson talk to me 11:59, 10 September 2014 (UTC)
Done rephrasing the article :) 001Jrm (talk) 05:01, 12 September 2014 (UTC)
ALT2 Seems ready for DYK now. Jinkinson talk to me 15:58, 12 September 2014 (UTC)