Template:Did you know nominations/Susan Rice (banker)

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The result was: promoted by Arthistorygrrl (talk) 23:04, 2 May 2016 (UTC)

Susan Rice (banker) edit

Created by Drchriswilliams (talk). Self-nominated at 13:50, 19 April 2016 (UTC).

  • New, long, neutral enough (BLP). Hook checks out & is interesting. No copying detected. Hook contained obvious typo: "when she was became chief executive" - "was" removed. Johnbod (talk) 17:35, 1 May 2016 (UTC)
  • The ref says "...she became the first female of a British clearing bank." Does this really mean the first female to head such a bank? Is there another ref that can be used to corroborate this point? I thought that means she was the lead female of the bank. --PFHLai (talk) 22:44, 1 May 2016 (UTC)
  • Ah, yes. I mentally supplied the missing word! There are a bunch of examples from her press kit in this search, including the BBC. Nom, please upgrade the ref. Johnbod (talk) 13:42, 2 May 2016 (UTC)
  • Some of the existing citations that document this are now attached to where this is covered main text of the article. Drchriswilliams (talk) 13:53, 2 May 2016 (UTC)
Promoting the original hook to prep area 4 Arthistorygrrl (talk) 23:04, 2 May 2016 (UTC)