Template:Did you know nominations/Cairngorm Plateau Disaster

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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 21:55, 25 April 2016 (UTC)

Cairngorm Plateau Disaster edit

Curran shelter
Curran shelter
  • ALT1: ... that in the 1971 Cairngorm Plateau disaster five school students died in a blizzard when they failed to reach the Curran shelter (pictured)?
  • ALT2: ... that five school students and their leader's assistant died in a blizzard in the 1971 Cairngorm Plateau Disaster when they failed to reach the Curran shelter (pictured) in the Scottish Highlands?
  • Reviewed: List of compositions by Peter Maxwell Davies
  • Comment: I have rather forced into the lead an online reference to the claims in the hook - the best references are offline. If this is not visible then a previewed Google book can be seen (at least by me) at the cited Baker, Patrick (2014). "The Lost Shelter". The Cairngorms: A Secret History. Birlinn. ISBN 9780857908094.

Created by Thincat (talk). Self-nominated at 08:21, 11 April 2016 (UTC).

  • New enough (nominated within 2 days of creation, long enough, well-sourced, neutral, offline sources accepted in good faith, hook is interesting and cited, image is included which is appropriate, QPQ information included. In both versions provided, the link to the article is piped, so I have suggested an alternate without a piped link. Otherwise all seems fine. Drchriswilliams (talk) 13:22, 18 April 2016 (UTC)
Thank you for your review. ALT2 is fine, of course, if that matches our standards better. Thincat (talk) 15:42, 20 April 2016 (UTC)