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The result was: promoted by Crisco 1492 (talk) 02:56, 19 September 2011 (UTC)
Steve Crosby edit
- ... that Steve Crosby was named the National Football League's top special teams coach, but his team had "the worst special teams season in NFL history" three years later?
- Reviewed: With less than 5 DYK credits, claiming exemption for reviewing another article.
Created/expanded by Bagumba (talk). Self nom at 09:36, 16 September 2011 (UTC)
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| StAnselm (talk) | Not according to the wording used. StAnselm (talk) | Some balance has been attempted, but still focusing on a negative aspect of the subject. StAnselm (talk) | U.S.-focused, but interesting StAnselm (talk) |
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The hook is too negative for a BLP. The source actually says "by some measures" or "arguably", so that needs to be changed, but I would prefer to see another hook. Everything else is fine. StAnselm (talk) 00:59, 17 September 2011 (UTC)
- ALT1 ... that Steve Crosby was named the National Football League's top special teams coach in 2007 and developed the league's most accurate kicker of all-time? —Bagumba (talk) 06:39, 17 September 2011 (UTC)
Yes, that's much better and I'm happy with the alternate hook. I note that "developed" does not appear in the article (since the hook is a synthesis of a number of facts) but I think it is justifiable from the context. StAnselm (talk) 06:55, 17 September 2011 (UTC)
