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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Hawkeye7 (talk) 21:03, 7 September 2014 (UTC)

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St. Gregory the Great Parish Church (Indang) edit

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  • ALT1:... that the pulpit of the Indang Church carries the Jesuit monogram?
  • ALT2:... that the church of Indang was the first church in Cavite to use galvanized iron as its roofing in 1869?

Created by Carlojoseph14 (talk). Self nominated at 14:53, 6 September 2014 (UTC).

  • The article creation date and length are OK. You have only 2 DYKs, so QPQ is not an issue. Source are online, and no plagiarism or copyright problems have been detected. The length of the hooks are ok, but ALT2 is not referenced in this form in the source. The article has very few inline references, so I inserted several citation needed templates and a clarify template. The article is very nice and interesting indeed, but in order to pass there is still a bit of work to be done. Alex2006 (talk) 15:31, 6 September 2014 (UTC)
  • Edited the article, added a clarification, added inline citations as I can since only a few resources (online or print) is available for cultural heritage sites in the Philippines. I cannot decipher the problem with ALT2. I'll try to look for more resources so that I could add more inline citation and expand the article. --Carlojoseph14 (talk) 15:57, 6 September 2014 (UTC)
  • The problem with ALT2 is that the source says that the church was "one of the first", not "the first" to use galvanized iron. I think that the original hook is the best, but maybe it should be made a little longer (writing that the church is in Cavite?). Regarding the citations, very good! Alex2006 (talk) 08:55, 7 September 2014 (UTC)
  • I see. You are right. It says "one of the first" so I edited the main article. We can stick to the original hook. I think here's a revision:
ALT4... that Indang Church in Cavite has eight patrons, St. Gregory the Great and the Seven Archangels?--Carlojoseph14 (talk) 11:15, 7 September 2014 (UTC)
  • Very good! I inserted a wikilink by the "patron" word (not everyone is roman catholic... :-)). Good to go for ALT4, and thanks!Alex2006 (talk) 11:31, 7 September 2014 (UTC)
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