Template:Did you know nominations/Song-Lý War

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:14, 22 May 2017 (UTC)

Song-Lý War edit

Lý forces invaded into modern day Nanning (Yongzhou) in Guangxi Province, highlighted in dark blue
Lý forces invaded into modern day Nanning (Yongzhou) in Guangxi Province, highlighted in dark blue
  • ... that in the aftermath of the Song-Lý War, the resulting line of demarcation between China and Vietnam that was negotiated after the war "would largely remain in place through to the present day," resulting in most of the current boundaries between the two nations?[1].
  • ALT0b:... that in the aftermath of the Song-Lý War, the borders negotiated after the war largely remained as the current boundaries between China and Vietnam?[1].
    • ALT1:... that the Vietnamese poem "Nam quốc sơn hà" was cited by general Lý Thường Kiệt in front of his army during the Song Counteroffensive prior to the battle of Nhu Nguyệt River?[2]
      • ALT2:... that during the Song-Lý War, after laying a forty-two day siege on Yongzhou (modern day Nanning), the Lý army massacred 58,000 people within the city?[3]
        • ALT3:... that during the Song-Lý War, more than half of the 300,000 Song troops during the Song Counteroffensive died due to "tropical climate and rampant disease"?[1]>

Created/expanded by TTTAssasinator (talk). Self-nominated at 07:45, 28 April 2017 (UTC).

  • new enough, long enough, generally within policy with regards to neutrality and citation. I did add a {{cn}} request for the poem in "Aftermath", please add it before main page appearance. The first hook is, I feel, the most interesting to a broad audience, appears and is cited in the article, and the source (available through Google Books) checks out. The image has the appropriate copyright tag. Earwig detected no violation. HaEr48 (talk) 07:27, 21 May 2017 (UTC)
I also added an ALT0b hook which is shorter than the original while conveying more or less the same info. What do you think? HaEr48 (talk) 17:17, 21 May 2017 (UTC)
  • Thanks, I have added two citations to the poem in the Aftermath section to address the issue, and also think that the ALT0b hook is fine as well. TTTAssasinator (talk) 21:11, 21 May 2017 (UTC)

Good to go now. Thanks. HaEr48 (talk) 01:25, 22 May 2017 (UTC)

References

  1. ^ a b c Anderson, James (2008). 'Treacherous Factions': Shifting Frontier Alliances in the Breakdown of Sino-Vietnamese Relations on the Eve of the 1075 Border War, in Battlefronts Real and Imagined: War, Border, and Identity in the Chinese Middle Period. Palgrave MacMillan. p. 191-192. ISBN 978-1-4039-6084-9.
  2. ^ Trần, Kim (1971). Việt Nam sử lược. Trung Bắc Tân Văn. p. 43. ISBN 9785879825893.
  3. ^ Chapuis, Oscar (1995). A history of Vietnam: from Hong Bang to Tu Duc. Greenwood Publishing Group. p. 77. ISBN 0-313-29622-7.