Template:Did you know nominations/Poro Point

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The result was: promoted by Hawkeye7 (talk) 20:48, 26 September 2014 (UTC)

Poro Point

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  • ... that on 28 July 1903, U.S. Civil Governor William H. Taft declared the land surrounding the lighthouse in Poro Point at a protected reservation?

Created by RioHondo (talk). Nominated by Shhhhwwww!! (talk) at 19:51, 26 August 2014 (UTC).

  • Article created within the appropriate timeframe, and at 2,880 characters is large enough. I have major paraphrasing concerns as the phrase "Civil Governor William H. Taft issued Executive Order No. 06 declaring the land surrounding the lighthouse at a radius of 200 meters as a US reservation" in the article is lifted directly from the article sourcing it. – Muboshgu (talk)
  • Done paraphrasing the entire sentence. Thanks!--RioHondo (talk) 02:06, 11 September 2014 (UTC)
  • Hi, I just added a supporting ref to source #7. Will rewrite those lines you cited. Thanks! --RioHondo (talk) 07:23, 12 September 2014 (UTC)
  • Sorry, totally forgot to come back and check on this. My concerns are addressed, so it gets the ole' checkmark. – Muboshgu (talk) 19:04, 25 September 2014 (UTC)