Template:Did you know nominations/Piper Chapman & Crazy Eyes (character)
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The result was: promoted by Hawkeye7 (talk) 20:15, 14 October 2014 (UTC)
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Piper Chapman, Crazy Eyes (character) edit
... that when Orange Is the New Black character Piper Chapman spurned her lesbian sexual advances, Suzanne "Crazy Eyes" Warren urinated on the floor in Chapman's bunk area?
Created by TonyTheTiger (talk). Self nominated at 20:10, 6 September 2014 (UTC).
- 1st and 2nd of 3 QPQs against Template:Did you know nominations/Off the Air (TV series); List of Off the Air episodes; Dave Hughes (producer).--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 21:54, 6 September 2014 (UTC)
New hook needed; current one is not valid per WP:DYKSG#C6: If the subject is a work of fiction or a fictional character, the hook must involve the real world in some way.
There's no "real world" here (the name of the television program doesn't count); striking it. BlueMoonset (talk) 03:58, 3 October 2014 (UTC)
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... that Uzo Aduba won Outstanding Guest Actress as Orange Is the New Black's "Crazy Eyes", while Taylor Schilling was nominated for Outstanding Lead Actress as Piper Chapman at the 66th Primetime Creative Arts and 66th Primetime Emmy Awards, respectively?--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 20:25, 3 October 2014 (UTC)
- ALT1 is 242 characters even without counting one of the two hooks, which is far too long. Please try aiming for under 200 characters in toto. BlueMoonset (talk) 19:34, 12 October 2014 (UTC)
- ALT2 ... that Uzo Aduba won a Primetime Emmy Award for Outstanding Guest Actress as Orange Is the New Black's "Crazy Eyes", while Taylor Schilling was nominated for Outstanding Lead Actress as Piper Chapman?--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 21:09, 12 October 2014 (UTC)
Full review needed now that possible hook has been submitted. BlueMoonset (talk) 21:21, 12 October 2014 (UTC)
Both articles were created on 4 September and are long enough, neutral (although a more encyclopedic tone would be preferable in some instances), and the relevant parts of the hook are cited in each article. Both are long enough with sufficient references. Earwig's tool for close paraphrasing found these, which are direct copies of the Wikipedia pages (with attribution). Both articles could do with a copyedit, especially for phrases like "we find out..." when summarising plot lines, but this isn't strictly a DYK requirement. Two QPQs done – good to go with ALT2. 97198 (talk) 11:17, 13 October 2014 (UTC)
