Template:Did you know nominations/Palkonda Hills

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The result was: promoted by Hawkeye7 (talk) 21:28, 11 July 2013 (UTC)

Palkonda Hills edit

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... that Tirupati is located in the Palkonda Hills of Andhra Pradesh, India?

ALT1:... that Palkonda literally means "milk hills"?
Reviewed: Vardan Stepanyan

Created by Ashwin147 (talk). Self nominated at 04:18, 29 June 2013 (UTC).

ALT1 yes, but you need to cite the fact in the first sentence. Some of the article paragraphs could use some filling out.♦ Dr. ☠ Blofeld 11:39, 29 June 2013 (UTC)

The original hook is cited as well. Personally, I like that better. Have expanded the lead to mention both hooks there (which is what I understood from your comment). I've added whatever I could get through Google. It runs into 1780 characters still. Ashwin147 (talk) 16:28, 29 June 2013 (UTC)

location is boring as a hook.♦ Dr. ☠ Blofeld 09:14, 30 June 2013 (UTC)

Tirupati is one of India's most visited temple towns. Hence I think it is likely to generate greater interest than a shorter hook on the meaning. Since I happened to come up with the ALT, how about we leave it to the person who promotes the hook to pick one? Ashwin147 (talk) 11:39, 30 June 2013 (UTC)

Needs a full review, including whether the hooks are interesting and properly cited. BlueMoonset (talk) 02:52, 9 July 2013 (UTC)

Length fine, new enough, cited. I personally find ALT1 more interesting. ♛♚★Vaibhav Jain★♚♛ ^Talk ^Email 16:35, 11 July 2013 (UTC)