Template:Did you know nominations/MTV Unplugged (Thirty Seconds to Mars EP)

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The result was: promoted by Hawkeye7 (talk) 22:49, 7 June 2014 (UTC)

MTV Unplugged (Thirty Seconds to Mars EP) edit

5x expanded by Earthh (talk). Self nominated at 20:41, 13 May 2014 (UTC).

  • Source: Thirty Seconds To Mars also revealed the painstaking process of deciding which song to cover, considering “everything from Cyndi Lauper to Zamfir the pan flautist, Eminem, Fleetwood Mac,” Jared said.
  • Article: Thirty Seconds to Mars revealed the painstaking process of deciding which song to cover, considering everything from Cyndi Lauper to Gheorghe Zamfir, Eminem, and Fleetwood Mac.
  • I have by no means done a full review, but after looking at just one of the references and finding a bad example of close paraphrasing I urge any reviewers to check thoroughly for copyvio in the rest of the article. 97198 (talk) 11:03, 1 June 2014 (UTC)
Thank you for your comment, 97198. Since it was an interview, I thought that the sentence would not be considered as a copyvio and that it would be discussed during the good article review if something was wrong. Anyway, I re-worded that sentence and checked the whole article, I can assure you that nothing is wrong.--Earthh (talk) 11:48, 1 June 2014 (UTC)
  • New enough (for 11 May) and long enough. Hook checks out online with citations #2, #4 and #6, but citation #7 which should support "extended play" is a deadlink. No obligation to QPQ for this self-nom who has achieved 2 DYKs. No problems with disambig links. No copyvio or close paraphrasing found (and I checked the link below that I found, too). Issue: External link #7 is a deadlink. Please find a cached version? Is this the correct link? If the one issue of citation #7 can be resolved, then this nom can be passed.--Storye book (talk) 13:21, 6 June 2014 (UTC)
  • Notes on above review: (1) I have linked "extended play" in the original hook because I am used to "EP", and at first glance took "play" to refer to a TV drama or stage play. (2) This review is for the original hook, but if anyone wants to shorten the original hook in the following way without changing the content - i.e. "EP" instead of "extended play" and "some" instead of "the contribution of the band's" - this review will support that change.--Storye book (talk) 13:21, 6 June 2014 (UTC)
Thank you for your review. I've just added an archived web page for citation #7.--Earthh (talk) 20:42, 6 June 2014 (UTC)