Template:Did you know nominations/List of Green Bay Packers Associated Press All-Pro selections
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List of Green Bay Packers Associated Press All-Pro selections
... that the only first-team AP All-Pro for the Green Bay Packers the last two seasons was kick returner Keisean Nixon?
- Reviewed: Peter Demetz
Moved to mainspace by Gonzo fan2007 (talk).
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 43 past nominations.
« Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 15:18, 24 May 2024 (UTC).
Probably needs a new hook as readers who aren't NFL fans or very familiar with American football may not see the interest of this hook. If a reader does not know what an "AP All-Pro" is or its significance, they won't find the hook interesting. Rejecting ALT0 per WP:DYKINT as well as the old supplementary guidelines (i.e. don't assume all readers are familiar with the sport you're talking about). Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 08:43, 23 June 2024 (UTC)
- ALT1: ... that the only Green Bay Packers' player recognized by the Associated Press as a first-team All-Pro the last two seasons was kick returner Keisean Nixon? « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 15:01, 23 June 2024 (UTC)
. Requesting a second opinion. By writing out "Associated Press" and adding "recognized" helps clarify that this is a national recognition. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 15:03, 23 June 2024 (UTC)
- Will probably have to disagree here. Readers might still not necessarily get what it means to be an "All-Pro" or how it is a big deal. Historically, our sports hooks have tended to underperform and be criticized as only appealing to sports fans, and I can't see how this hook or angle is any different. A completely different angle is probably needed here. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 15:14, 23 June 2024 (UTC)
- . Requesting a second opinion. I.e. from another editor please. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 16:14, 23 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Gonzo fan2007: What about something like, ALT2: ... that the Green Bay Packers once had 14 players selected to the national All-Pro team? I don't necessarily love the current hook, but I think the article has potential for something interesting to be picked out from it. Hey man im josh (talk) 11:59, 24 June 2024 (UTC)