- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by PrimalMustelid talk 18:27, 7 March 2024 (UTC)
Lasso (album)
Created by Lk95 (talk). Nominated by MaranoFan (talk) at 19:39, 1 February 2024 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Lasso (album); consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.
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The article is only barely above the minimum length, and could easily be made more concise. The sentences "After Norman Fucking Rockwell! (2019), things took a "huge turn" and has been "going down that path aggressively". Musically and privately, her fear turned out to be the circumstance of being "scared into making safe choices" but instead taking "cool-off"s after releases to "reevaluate things"." are extremely confusing. Furthermore, the nominated hook does not meet WP:DYKINT—there is no reason it is intriguing to an uninformed audience who have no idea who Lana Del Rey is. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 13:54, 15 February 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review, AirshipJungleman29. Del Rey just announced the album and unfortunately hasn't given detailed interviews about it. I did just clean up the article quite a bit based on what Background information critics have covered in the context of this album's announcement. I guess the hook could be turned into this to make it more interesting:
- NØ 15:54, 15 February 2024 (UTC)
Definitely an improvement. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 16:02, 15 February 2024 (UTC)
The article is only barely above the minimum length, and could easily be made more concise. The sentences "After Norman Fucking Rockwell! (2019), things took a "huge turn" and has been "going down that path aggressively". Musically and privately, her fear turned out to be the circumstance of being "scared into making safe choices" but instead taking "cool-off"s after releases to "reevaluate things"." are extremely confusing. Furthermore, the nominated hook does not meet WP:DYKINT—there is no reason it is intriguing to an uninformed audience who have no idea who Lana Del Rey is. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 13:54, 15 February 2024 (UTC)
