Template:Did you know nominations/John Herrnstein

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The result was: promoted by Hawkeye7 (talk) 22:59, 29 June 2012 (UTC)

John Herrnstein edit

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... that John Herrnstein (pictured) was the third generation of the Herrnstein family to play for the Michigan Wolverines football team?

Reviewed: 4 2012 Pulitzer Prize Winners - "Water by the Spoonful"

Created/expanded by Cbl62 (talk). Self nom at 02:25, 28 June 2012 (UTC)

The end of the article is a little on the proseline side IMO, but this isn't a GAN. Expansion and hook check out.--Mo Rock...Monstrous (leech44) 02:13, 29 June 2012 (UTC)

Good observation. I've reworked that a bit. Cbl62 (talk) 03:51, 29 June 2012 (UTC)

Thanks for doing that, I think it reads better now. --Mo Rock...Monstrous (leech44) 16:54, 29 June 2012 (UTC)

I hadn't read the proseline essay before. It has some useful tips. Thanks for calling it to my attention. Cbl62 (talk) 17:00, 29 June 2012 (UTC)