- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 09:40, 7 July 2014 (UTC)
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Jan O. Jansson
edit- ... that ....Jan O. Jansson (pictured) appeared nude in the music video for singer Markoolio's song "Vilse i skogen", as the water spirit Neck from Swedish folktales?
- ALT1:... that ....Jan O. Jansson (pictured) has the nickname "Nude-Janne" because he walked around nude in most episodes of the two seasons he participated in The Farm?
- Reviewed:Art Is... The Permanent Revolution
Created by User:BabbaQ (talk). Nominated by BabbaQ (talk) at 12:38, 2 July 2014 (UTC).
Article is new and long enough. QPQ done today (reviewed article not promoted yet). Article has inline online sources in Swedish which I can read. I prefer hook nb. 1. which is sourced. I corrected the timeframe for the video named in the hook, and when I checked a number of sentences in the beginning of the "Career" section, I couldn't find information given in those sentences in the provided sources. Unless I have overlooked something this needs be corrected (sources 6 and 7 do not back up the information they were supposed to support, as far as I can see). Photo is labelled as own work and appears to be legit, I am not sure it will work so well on the front page.
- (There also appears to be some problems with the formatting of the DYKnoms; I don't know how to fix that) Iselilja (talk) 19:03, 2 July 2014 (UTC)
- Addition: I think the hook probably should be copyedited slightly, maybe to say
- ALT2 "... that Jan O. Jansson (pictured) appeared nude when he portrayed the water spirit Neck in a music video for singer Markoolio?" Iselilja (talk) 19:11, 2 July 2014 (UTC)