Template:Did you know nominations/Ellen Paneok

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The result was: promoted by Hawkeye7 (talk) 12:58, 24 July 2012 (UTC)

Ellen Paneok

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Created/expanded by Maile66 (talk). Self nom at 20:19, 22 July 2012 (UTC)

  • Date and length fine. Hook correctly formatted and cited. Sources reliable. No copy vios. No photo to check. Interesting article and sources. Two small issues: (1) the post-traumatic vertebral fractures were all in one vertebra, (2) most of the info from the first two sentences of the background section are from refs 4 and 5. You just need an inline citation indicating so. Anne (talk) 06:22, 23 July 2012 (UTC)
  • Thank you for catching these things. Correction has been made about the vertebrae. Her mother's ancestry has been referenced to what is now Ref 1 (AWHF). The the differing birthplaces has been referenced to Ref 1 and what is now Ref 2 (Women Pilots), both sources where the conflict shows up. Maile66 (talk) 11:15, 23 July 2012 (UTC)
  • Good to go! Anne (talk) 12:22, 23 July 2012 (UTC)