- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 18:33, 22 January 2015 (UTC)
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Akeel Lynch edit
- ... that Penn State football running back Akeel Lynch moved from Toronto to New York to play football in hopes of earning a scholarship?
- ALT1:... that Penn State football running back Akeel Lynch's father died when he was seven years old?
- Reviewed: working on Template:Did you know nominations/Bill Swancutt
- Comment: Open to any alternate hook.
5x expanded by Go Phightins! (talk). Self nominated at 19:54, 1 January 2015 (UTC).
Expanded 5x within the last week, and article is long enough. Moving to get a scholarship needs more context to be enticing, and father dying is a bit of a downer for a hook. I'm proposing a new ALT2.—Bagumba (talk) 08:43, 5 January 2015 (UTC)- ALT2:... that after moving from Canada, Akeel Lynch learned American football and was named New York Gatorade Player of the Year?
- Someone please review ALT 2. Thanks. Go Phightins! 19:19, 11 January 2015 (UTC)
ALT2 looks good to me. Wizardman 17:25, 20 January 2015 (UTC)
