Talk:Will Rogers (American football)
Latest comment: 1 year ago by Gonzo fan2007 in topic GA Review
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GA Review
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Reviewer: Gonzo fan2007 (talk · contribs) 14:40, 16 May 2023 (UTC)
I'll take this one. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 14:40, 16 May 2023 (UTC)
General
edit- MOS:DASH, go through and update all the hyphens to en dashes.
- Done
Lead
edit- Expand lead to include info about high school career.
- Done
- MOS:CITELEAD, no need for the inline citation in the lead.
- Done
Early life and high school career
editRogers was born on August 19, 2001 in Louisville, Mississippi.
, comma after "2001"- Done
- I would spell out the whole link Brandon, Mississippi, since "Brandon" is typically a first name.
- Done
A strong athlete, he played a variety of sports growing up, including baseball and soccer but was the most passionate about football, where in elementary school he ran drills with his fathers high school players.
, I would split into two sentences....and soccer. However, he was the most...
- Done
fathers high school players.
, "fathers" should be "father's"- Done
- MOS:ACRO1STUSE, spell out
NFL
in it's first use- Done
under his father who served as the teams offensive coordinator
, "teams" should be "team's"- Done
College career
editfor the seasons first game.
, "seasons" should be "season's"- Done
...replacing a struggling Costello. Rogers struggled in his debut, throwing two interceptions.
, repetitive use of "struggle" sounds weird- Changed word
...have a historic performance on the road against Auburn.
, the hidden linking of "road" isn't necessary- Removed
Two weeks later he had his highest passer rating of the season, posting a 194.0 rating in a blowout win over East Tennessee State.
, the duplication of "rating" sounds weird, maybe try to rewrite a bit?- Rewrote sentence
coach Mike Leach unexpectedly passed away after suffering a heart attack
, delete "unexpectedly" and replace "passed away" with "died" MOS:EUPHEMISM- Done
Images
edit- No images.
References
edit- Need consistency with date formatting, i.e. 2023-04-02 vs April 2, 2023. Pick one and stick with it throughout.
- Done
- Ref 9: MOS:ALLCAPS, convert the title to normal case
- Done
- Be consistent with the website field, either use .com or not across all of them (i.e. Yahoo vs Yahoo.com)
- Done
- Ref 34: the website should just be "WRUF.com" or "WRUF"
- Done
- Ref 10: where does it say he is the 24th best pro-style QB of his class?
- Fixed
- All other refs look good, spot checks seemed good.
Nice work. Putting on hold. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 14:40, 16 May 2023 (UTC)
- @Gonzo fan2007 I believe that I have fixed everything. Newtothisedit (talk) 16:17, 18 May 2023 (UTC)
- Looks good, passing! « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 16:27, 18 May 2023 (UTC)
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