Talk:Warnbro railway station/GA1
Latest comment: 2 years ago by GhostRiver in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: GhostRiver (talk · contribs) 05:00, 26 October 2021 (UTC)
I'll look at this tomorrow when I am more awake! — GhostRiver 05:00, 26 October 2021 (UTC)
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Infobox and lede edit
- No comma needed after "with seven bus stands"
- "The station was known as Waikiki station during planning. The station was included" → "Known as Waikiki station during planning, the station was included"
Description edit
- First instance of "Transperth" in the body should be linked
- No comma needed after "transit officer booth"
Public art edit
- No comma needed after "with help from TUES"
History edit
- "was planned on only being single track" → "was only intended to be single track"
- No comma needed after "spur off the Armadale line"
- "These changes caused the predicted patronage at Waikiki station to be lower." → 'These changes lowered the predicted patronage at Waikiki station."
- "between Perth and Waikiki to be opened"
Services edit
- "2013-14 financial year" → "2013–14 financial year"
References edit
- Good
General comments edit
- Photos are properly licensed and relevant
- No stability concerns in the revision history
- Earwig score looks good
All minor changes! Putting on hold for now; feel free to ping me with questions, and let me know when you're finished! — GhostRiver 17:37, 26 October 2021 (UTC)
- Thank you for doing this review @GhostRiver:. I have made all the changes you requested. Steelkamp (talk) 01:37, 27 October 2021 (UTC)