Talk:Victoria Brown (water polo)

Victoria Brown (water polo) has been listed as one of the Sports and recreation good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.

Article milestones
Date	Process	Result
May 18, 2012	Good article nominee	Listed
July 13, 2023	Good article reassessment	Kept

A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on March 7, 2012.

The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that the parents of Australian national team water polo player Victoria Brown believed that she would be an Olympian in an equestrian event?

Current status: Good article

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GA Review edit

Latest comment: 11 years ago2 comments1 person in discussion

This review is transcluded from Talk:Victoria Brown (water polo)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: ChrisGualtieri (talk · contribs) 19:49, 4 May 2012 (UTC)Reply

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Criteria edit

Good Article Status - Review Criteria

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(a) the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct; and

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(a) it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline;

(b) reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose);^[2] and

(c) it contains no original research.

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(a) it addresses the main aspects of the topic;^[3] and

(b) it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style).

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Well-written:

Criteria	Notes	Result
(a) (prose)	Some word choice issues. 'As a youngster'... etc	Pass
(b) (MoS)	No problems.	Pass

Verifiable with no original research:

Criteria	Notes	Result
(a) (references)	No concerns.	Pass
(b) (citations to reliable sources)	No problems.	Pass
(c) (original research)	No concerns.	Pass

Broad in its coverage:

Criteria	Notes	Result
(a) (major aspects)	Its on topic.	Pass
(b) (focused)	As much as needed.	Pass

Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each.

Notes	Result
Aside from the second quote with 'the Italian's bite' it looks good. I'll remove that, its taken out of context and could be implied negatively.	Pass

Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute.

Notes	Result
No edit wars.	Pass

Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio:

Criteria	Notes	Result
(a) (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales)	Nice pictures!	Pass
(b) (appropriate use with suitable captions)	All good.	Pass

Result edit

Result	Notes
Pass	Aside from that minor issue, no concerns. I'll pass it.

Discussion edit

I looked at this article weeks ago, but had refrained from posting it up. I wasn't originally going to edit the content, but I think one little edit is fine. Nothing is preventing it from passing. ChrisGualtieri (talk) 15:09, 18 May 2012 (UTC)Reply

Additional Notes edit

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Information added to article edit

Latest comment: 11 years ago1 comment1 person in discussion

This edit included some potentially useful information but it wasn't sourced and there were errors. Any help in finding sources and improving the article to include this new information would be much appreciated. :) --LauraHale (talk) 10:35, 17 June 2012 (UTC)Reply

Update edit

Latest comment: 9 years ago1 comment1 person in discussion

This article finish in 2012 prior to Olympic Games. Since is a GD, should be updated ASAP. Thanks. --Ganímedes (talk) 16:06, 20 November 2014 (UTC)Reply

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Latest comment: 9 months ago5 comments3 people in discussion

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Result: No consensus to delist. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 13:47, 13 July 2023 (UTC)Reply

This article was made a GA in 2012, whilst it would be a GA then, 11 years later it fails criteria 2 as not all information is verifiable and it doesn't reflect anything of her career post 2012. Her "current work" as of 2012 is likely to be out of date. At age 37, she is likely to have retired from elite and club level. For example, she is not listed on the Victoria club 2023 roster: https://vicphoenixwaterpolo.com/victorian-awl-womens-squad/ (note the team she played for Victorian Tigers has since been renamed). LibStar (talk) 07:12, 6 July 2023 (UTC)Reply

I don't see any reason why the information is not verifiable; the article is fully referenced.
The Victorian Tigers left the National Women’s Water Polo League after the 2013 season. There was no Victorian team in the league from 2017 to 2021. The Victorian Phoenix was created in 2022.
There is no information online about her career after 2013 and she is presumed to have retired. If it is really necessary we can cheat and contact her directly but the information gathered may not be able to be used in the article. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 21:06, 6 July 2023 (UTC)Reply
So do you believe this is still a GA? LibStar (talk) 23:46, 6 July 2023 (UTC)Reply

I see no reason why it should not be. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 00:25, 7 July 2023 (UTC)Reply

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