Talk:Uwasa no Midori-kun!!

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Too many characters

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Need help cutting down the list to the main protagonist only. Extremepro (talk) 06:11, 27 March 2009 (UTC)Reply

Light language

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I noticed that the description of Tsukasa's actions has been extremely understated, to the point that it says Midori's anger toward him is on account of his "irresponsible behavior". The man took advantage of her, played to her fantasies in order to deliberately convince her that they were truly in love and would marry one day, all to get around her decision that she wouldn't sleep with anyone before marriage. Afterward, he didn't "dump" her or turn her down, he bragged to his friends about how easy she was and how he'd be able to get her a few more times before going home. Deceiving her to make her do something she wouldn't do if she knew the truth is far beyond irresponsible, and dismissing her to his friends as an easy, temporary source of entertainment is much more than can be done justice with a term like "dumping". Wouldn't there be better ways to phrase this? — Preceding unsigned comment added by 12.45.169.2 (talk) 16:50, 12 March 2013 (UTC)Reply

Serious ending confusion

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Recent edits seem to have completely altered the apparent ending of the story. Previously, it appeared that while Midori did at some late point reject Kazuma and date Tsukasa, she ultimately realized that Kazuma was the one she truly loved and returned to him, and at the end they were married with a daughter, and Tsukasa as well had a wife and child of his own. In the present version, the children have been removed and it says that the story ended with Midori dumping Kazuma and moving in with Tsukasa. These two versions are completely contradictory. The best I can figure, either someone thought the story ended earlier than it did and made a mistaken edit, or one of the versions was doctored to produce an ending absent from the original. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 76.30.50.240 (talk) 19:25, 20 March 2014 (UTC) Correction, upon checking the Japanese version of this article, it appears that the story did indeed end with Midori returning to and ultimately marrying Kazuma, and Tsukasa ultimately marrying someone else. Either the end or official afterword apparently even show both couples' children. The article should be edited by someone who's properly read the entire manga to show the true end.76.30.50.240 (talk) 19:31, 20 March 2014 (UTC)Reply

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