Talk:The Incentive/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 17:31, 3 September 2012 (UTC)

• Infobox: Use {{start date}} in templates for dates

  Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 03:55, 8 September 2012 (UTC)

• Infobox: No guest stars?

  Unfortunately, no one big enough.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 03:55, 8 September 2012 (UTC)

• Infobox: Link The Office?

  Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 03:55, 8 September 2012 (UTC)

• Lede: Unlink television series per WP:OVERLINK

  Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 03:55, 8 September 2012 (UTC)

• Lede: Same goes for showrunner

  Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 03:55, 8 September 2012 (UTC)

• Lede: NBC → the National Broadcasting Company (NBC), as per MOS:ACRO

  Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 03:55, 8 September 2012 (UTC)

• Plot: Direct quotes need actual references

  I think I fixed this.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 03:55, 8 September 2012 (UTC)

• Production: "The official website for The Office" don't think that is important to subject. Perhaps remove.

  I kept it, as its in all the other articles. If I removed it, it would make no sense, and readers would question whether they were leaked or officially released.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 03:55, 8 September 2012 (UTC)

• Cultural references: Seems small. Expand, or merge with production

  It's a paragraph-sized section, and production and cultural references are two different things.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 03:55, 8 September 2012 (UTC)

• Reception: "%" → "percent"

  Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 03:55, 8 September 2012 (UTC)

• Reviews: Seems quotey. Consider paraphrasing, etc.

  Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 03:55, 8 September 2012 (UTC)

• I did a little copy-edit, please check it, which had some typos

  Looks good.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 03:55, 8 September 2012 (UTC)

• That's all, on hold for now. Good work.
• TBrandley 03:42, 8 September 2012 (UTC)

  Think I got everything. Thank you!--Gen. Quon (Talk) 03:55, 8 September 2012 (UTC)

  Yep. Article looks good now. Passing. Well done! TBrandley 03:59, 8 September 2012 (UTC)