Talk:The Holy Sea
Latest comment: 15 years ago by Helenabella in topic Style & Neutrality
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Style & Neutrality edit
This article fails to adhere to Wikipedia's standards, particularly in its adoption of a non-NPOV and use of peacock words. (For example, 'a mainstay of the Perth music scene', 'a singer/songwriter of diverse talents and interests', 'renowned pedal-steel player', ' studied contrasts and finely crafted songwriting', 'balanced pathos with humour creating an album of mature intensity that explored the bands interest in the nature of identity set amongst the Australian poetic tradition'.)
Suggest a full rewrite adopting an encyclopedic style. Helenabella (talk) 13:14, 20 February 2009 (UTC)