Talk:Suave (song)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 08:24, 4 January 2023 (UTC)

Good Article review progress box Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

I will review this per your request, Erick! --K. Peake 08:24, 4 January 2023 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

• Shouldn't Larrabee be written as Larrabee Sound in the infobox?
• "The song was met with positive reactions" → "The song received positive reactions"
• Move the award-winning sentence to being the one after the above, also place the music video one after the commercial sentence
• "by Kiko Guerrero, filmed in" → "by Kiko Guerrero and filmed in" since the last and is the only one to not use "was"
• "Commercially, the track reached" → "Commercially, the song reached"
• "Rivera's cover was nominated in" → "The cover was nominated in"

Background and composition

• "A 27-second sample of Miguel's "Suave"," → "A 27-second sample of "Suave"," on the audio sample text, also change the title to "Suave"
• First para looks good!
• Wikilink as cover versions instead
• Shouldn't you identify the album by name in the second para?
• The dance genre is not sourced
• "and its lyrics narrates about a" → "and its lyrics narrate about a"

Promotion and reception

• Wouldn't it be more suitable to write that the live version was featured on Miguel's live albums then write the titles?
• "listed as the best three songs" → "listed it as the best three songs"
• Wikilink VH1
• Why is the Notitas Musicales position not mentioned here?
• Remove pipe on covered

Track listing

• Good

Personnel

• Pipe percussion to Percussion instrument
• Pipe background vocals to Backing vocalist
• Pipe mixing assistant to Audio mixing (recorded music)

Weekly charts

• Retitle to Charts

Jerry Rivera version

• Infobox looks good!
• The 1995 recording year is not sourced
• Wikilink funk
• "became his first number one song" → "became Rivera's first number one song"

Charts

• Good

See also

• Good

References

• Copyvio score looks respectable at 33.3%!!
• Wikilink AllMusic on ref 2 instead of ref 3, also remove Rovi Corporation
• Cite GQ as work/website instead on ref 13 with the wikilink
• Fix MOS:CAPS issues with ref 18
• Wikilink Milenio on ref 22
• Pipe Sony Music España to Sony Music on ref 24
• Luis Miguel should be author linked on ref 25 instead of ref 26 and format his name in the same way for both to be consistent
• WP:OVERLINK of AllMusic on ref 28

Final comments and verdict

•  On hold until all of the issues are fixed; here is your true New Year's gift! --K. Peake 09:47, 4 January 2023 (UTC)

  Thank you for the review! @Franlm14:, can you handle it for me? My only days off work are Sunday and Mondays. Erick (talk) 19:26, 4 January 2023 (UTC)

  @Kyle Peake Alright, I think I got all of them. As usual, let me know if I missed any of them. The only one that confused me was ""by Kiko Guerrero, filmed in" → "by Kiko Guerrero and filmed in" since the last and is the only one to not use "was"". Erick (talk) 15:12, 8 January 2023 (UTC)

  Magiciandude This point meant that it is the last part of the sentence and does not use was, also you missed changing the audio sample text. --K. Peake 21:40, 9 January 2023 (UTC)

  Magiciandude ✓ Pass now, I had to re-edit the music video sentence since I meant the part after the comma could be changed because it did not use was. --K. Peake 09:20, 10 January 2023 (UTC)